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From misery and pain I want to be
free and ridden
I refrain from searching way too deep
The problems too high the sins too steep
Future holds the door open to uncertainty
Fear screeches out ever so faintly
My mind is full of calamity and despair
As temptation reeks havoc my soul is snared
I'm a slave to burning desires
Lustfully hanging on passion I dire
Save me from this reckless shame
I no longer want to play this mind game
As I struggle deep within myself I find
Burning sensations still play deep in my mind
One question I'd like to ask
Do you too have dark secrets you try and mask? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Dark hidden secrets...

Contributed by mina-1 on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Untold secrets lay buried and hidden
From misery and pain I want to be
free and ridden
I refrain from searching way too deep
The problems too high the sins too steep
Future holds the door open to uncertainty
Fear screeches out ever so faintly
My mind is full of calamity and despair
As temptation reeks havoc my soul is snared
I'm a slave to burning desires
Lustfully hanging on passion I dire
Save me from this reckless shame
I no longer want to play this mind game
As I struggle deep within myself I find
Burning sensations still play deep in my mind
One question I'd like to ask
Do you too have dark secrets you try and mask?

Copyright Â© mina-1 ... [ 2005-04-07 22:22:40]
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Re: Dark hidden secrets... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:29:26 PM AEST
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Good work.
I think we all do as we're only human.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Dark hidden secrets... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:52:12 PM AEST
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Very nice write sue intereting question . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Dark hidden secrets... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:28:01 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM! YES,WE ALL DO HAVE 1 OR MORE!! SOMETIMES LUST CAN OVER POWER WHAT WE THINK IS LOVE!!! SO WE LIVE & WE LEARN,& HOPEFULLY CAN GIVE IT ENUFF THOUGHT SO THEY NO LONGER BURN!!!!

DAN!!!!!

Re: Dark hidden secrets... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:06:57 AM AEST
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Good piece Sue with a eye opening question at the end. We all know the answer is yes. You are suck a good writer, your lest read poem is better then any of mine. But I love to write it frees my mined. Keep writing Sue and I’ll continue to read and again thank you for this write….Steve

Re: Dark hidden secrets... (User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 12:10:32 AM AEST
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Nice portrayal of avoidance.
How often we try to submerge
that pain deep within.
Fear of openning up those old wounds
thinking thye might never heal if we do.

Thumbs up.
2bpositive

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