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Lost Time
Contributed by
JacobsKK
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:22:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Shadows occasionally touching,
Candlelight written on the air.
Falling deadly silent,
I absorb the love that’s there.
Thinking about you endless.
Barely sleeping the night before.
Shivering with every kiss,
But warmed up with a longing for more.
Nothing else seems to matter,
It usually never does.
Falling into the luxury of you,
Remembering what once was.
Striking electric eyes,
Take all the pain away.
Your every inch of passion,
Makes the silence seem okay.
More in love with you than words,
Could even begin to rhyme.
Using the thirty minutes we had,
To make up for lost time.
Copyright ©
JacobsKK
... [
2005-04-07 21:22:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:08:03 PM AEST (User
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This poem don't need my comment it speaks
4 itself, but in a phrase, my friend u nailed it,
liek the old rita coolige song, " i'd rather leave
while i'm in love " beautiful write ur good, like
your style . . . Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Lost Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:29:12 AM AEST (User
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Good..Good..Venkat |
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Re: Lost Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:29:19 AM AEST (User
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Good..Good..Venkat |
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Re: Lost Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:21:05 PM AEST (User
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wow you've written a masterpeice of heavenly beauty here.
great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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