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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Oponent
[time] => 2005-04-07 19:12:42
[hometext] => been working really hard on this. i don't think it's done in the sense it needs alot of work. i just need some insight on what needs to be fixed please.
[bodytext] => when you look in the mirror, what do you see? the opposite of your reflection you think it is a photo of perfection when you walk down the street, how do you strut? your nose is stuck to the sky you think you are an angel who can fly when you sleep at night, how do you feel? you lie alone, your price to be shallow your left with nothing but that tearstained pillow when you think about it, whats on your mind? you are the only one to blame you think it is a crying shame when you took every oportunity you had forgranted, what were you thinking? you had everything and anything; you had it all for a while you thought that was how it would always be; you blew them off with a smile when she needed you most and you walked away, how did you go on? you burried yourself in what you wanted you were the only one who mattered the smile you wear was painted well honestly your life has been shattered Now that you realize someone can see you, how vulnarable to you feel? It sucks when you are found out when your cut wide open to bleed someone sees right past the mask they know you are not without need you are exactly what I hate the most you are fake in every aspect of living I will not walk away like i should though cuz' for once i am the one winning I have come to exploit you to the world the pleasure is mine, indeed I'm here to unplug you from the wall congradulations you bucket of greed when you notice the prank, this game i am playing, what is your next move? will you understand that life is a gift that the world does not circle just you you cannot go through life alone your grey sky will never turn blue don't be upset with yourself don't be angry that you didn't forsee this you thought i was someone to trust you once even stole a kiss this is not because i hate you it is simply the worlds revenge I had to beat you at your own game to properly avenge. now that we have reached this moment of truth, how will you react? will you be mad and cuss me out then continue your life of no meaning or will you see these points i've made and chose to start back at the beginning no matter the choice you make, there is something you should know. I love you and i always will but your disguise must be discarded artificial living is not my thing your true self must be regarded [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 43 [informant] => purplestary [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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