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Array ( [sid] => 90261 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Final Bow [time] => 2005-04-07 17:34:22 [hometext] => As the curtains close... [bodytext] => Endless paths,
Plain white walls.
The ceiling crumbles,
And the floor falls.

The lights shine dim,
The pain lingers on.
Im so very weak,
I can no longer be strong.

The candle flickers,
The faith disappears.
My soul departs,
Over run by fears.

My breathing slows,
I begin to cry.
My hearts beats gone,
I know I must die.

I fought so hard for this moment,
Im finally at rest.
I know in my grave,
Is when im my best.

Few will cry,
Few wil care.
Most wont notice,
If im not there.

I go to sleep this final time,
Wake I wont tomorrow.
Let me be strong for once,
I promise, you wont feel sorrow.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Pats4eva7 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My Final Bow

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:34:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Endless paths,
Plain white walls.
The ceiling crumbles,
And the floor falls.

The lights shine dim,
The pain lingers on.
Im so very weak,
I can no longer be strong.

The candle flickers,
The faith disappears.
My soul departs,
Over run by fears.

My breathing slows,
I begin to cry.
My hearts beats gone,
I know I must die.

I fought so hard for this moment,
Im finally at rest.
I know in my grave,
Is when im my best.

Few will cry,
Few wil care.
Most wont notice,
If im not there.

I go to sleep this final time,
Wake I wont tomorrow.
Let me be strong for once,
I promise, you wont feel sorrow.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-04-07 17:34:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Final Bow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 06:31:33 PM AEST
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great job, very sad, i hope this isnt how u really feel....hang in there

Re: My Final Bow (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:52:10 PM AEST
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Though sad in content, this is a very good
write. The rhythm flows nicely, and the mood
is well established, intentionally or not. I wish
you the best, and I really hope there are
people who care, whether you realize it or not.
Keep your chin up.

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