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How About Now
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:29:55 PM in AEST
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I’ve been tryin’ to reach you
Somehow I can’t seem to get through
I was standin’ before you
But your blinded eyes, they never knew
I know you never noticed all the tears I cried
How I longed to hold you all those lonely nights
I screamed your name into the vacuum of my soul
Listenin’ for an echo that could not console
(well)
How about now?
(can you hear me?)
How about now?
(when you look my way)
Can you see…
That I’m on my knees
And I’m bleeding out
All that is left of me?
I see you tryin’ to reach me
I don’t have the strength left to pull through
I was hopin’ I’d be free
But I still feel a connection here to you
You take me with you every where you turn to go
I’m right beside you, nothin’s changed, you’ll never know
I die a little more every time he speaks your name
I wish you could’ve seen just a fraction of my pain
(but)
How about now?
(can you hear me?)
How about now?
(when you look my way)
Can you see…
That I’m on my knees
And I’ve given you
All that is left of me?
The red lines you read in the fine print were me
The voices you heard and tried hard not to see
The shadow that tricks the corner of your eye
The breath that escapes at the end of each sigh
The breeze that caresses on a windless day
That lump in your throat that will not go away
The tear in your eye when there ain’t nothin’ wrong
The one in your head who keeps repeating that damn song
How about now?
(can you hear me?)
How about now?
(when you look my way)
Can you see…
That I’m on my knees
And I’m bleeding out
All that is left …
... About now
(can you hear me?)
How about now?
(when you look my way)
Can you see…
That I’m on my knees
And I’ve given you
All that is left of me?
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Nazmythian
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2005-04-07 17:29:55]
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Re: How About Now
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:40:40 PM AEST
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This is a hard subject, Scott...
You have written your thoughts out so well, this is stunning..
But..this is a terrible write. It's sad, and painful..
I sort of wish I could make it all better.
Great write sweetie.. I'm here for you.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: How About Now
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by GurlyTye on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:58:02 PM AEST
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| much like so many before. it's moving. your have such a wonderfull talent to write. |
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Re: How About Now
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 06:33:06 PM AEST
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| great write, song lyrics must be very difficult, we are all here for you!! |
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Re: How About Now
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by freckle on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:14:01 PM AEST
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Shall I say another great write? I shall...and I loved these lines...
The shadow that tricks the corner of your eye
The breath that escapes at the end of each sigh.....
Very, very good!!!
Carol |
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Re: How About Now
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:58:57 PM AEST
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wow this write is amazing .
You really know how to put into words.
another amazing write. |
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Re: How About Now
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:21:05 AM AEST
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Awsome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: How About Now
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:28:27 AM AEST
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Brilliant write with alot of intensity and feeling.
Leia |
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Re: How About Now
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:43:12 AM AEST
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Great write, Naz.
I like the way the refrains
develop.
--Ghost |
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Re: How About Now
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:29:35 PM AEST
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Gorgeous, incredible flow, yet I could not help but feel the harsh sting of tears within these weary eyes of mine... I thought I had none left to give, but here they are, streaming down my face... Cheri Nazzy, I can so relate to this... So many of my friends have been in that place, that dark corner of eternal shadows and sorrow... not to mention, me too... They have tried to connect with me, tried to take me back, and I never noticed, never heard their cries through the fog... They have given me so much, and yet, I am oblivious to their sacrifices... Merci beaucoup... for helping me see and hear their dying shouts... Incredibly sad, filled with despair to help another... My dear friend, I hope they will hear your pain-filled melody... and maybe... sing back. Exquisite till the very end. "How about now?" Oh yes, yes... I hear you now... I hear everything now. Loud and clear. And I won't ever lose the connection. Thank you, my dear friend, for showing me exactly how much friends do care... Much hope and comfort for you... for hope is eternal, and friendship just as long...Smiles and huggles for a good friend. All my love, cheri. Forever,
Votre toujours ami,
Stephy. *hugs and love* |
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Re: How About Now
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by Blondie14560 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:57:36 PM AEST
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| Very good song...you really kno how to put things into words |
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Re: How About Now
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:02:46 PM AEST
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Wow! Nazzy can sing me a lullabye anytime. These words resound in sadness yet I can almost hear them from here! Great Job, Naz! joni
(vrrrrrrroooooooooooooommmmmmmmm) :-) |
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Re: How About Now
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:36:53 PM AEST
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A very well composed song. Very descriptive and so full of emotion. You can feel ur pain in every line. A fantastic, but heart breaking song.
Well done
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: How About Now
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:41:40 PM AEST
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Naz,
Great write and quite emotional. The "How about now" triggered some ...what about now questions of my own.
Ya what about now,
Anyway, Super write
Will, Terry |
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Re: How About Now
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:42:44 PM AEST
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Very poignant. This doesn't deal with suicide per se so much as the heartache that often goes with it.
Well done.
Andrew |
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Re: How About Now
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 05:43:18 PM AEST
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| how about yesterday ?? God .. drive me crazy why don't you.. I just posted a poem for you my lovely ... that last work of yours .. sucked me into a vortex ... man o man nazzi ... can you write or what ??? |
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