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Array ( [sid] => 90250 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can't take it, I can't be strong [time] => 2005-04-07 15:55:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You said you really cared about me

I guess I was just to blind to see

That you never cared, feed me

Yes! Yet again i'm let down, yet again you have lied

I guess that's the price i have paid

A worthless ***** whom had it all

But now I have been knocked down, I no longer stand tall

The hurt and pain of the past are the only things I can recall

When I'm alone, shh no one knows, for I sit and squall

I'm sorry I want out of this

But what's really funny, you think I'm still lost with bliss

I no longer want to exist

I'm sick of bloodying my wrist

For when I do, I only come away with a few satisfying figurines

No more blood shall fill my veins

I shall finally have my turn

There is no need for any concern

I will not plan a return , for I do not intend to

This is true,

This is the last of my last word

I’m sorry this occurred

I’ve preached for far to long,

I can’t take it, I can’t be strong [comments] => 1 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 36 [informant] => shrunkin_fool34142316 [notes] => Mod. 9 bleep word 4/08/05 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I can't take it, I can't be strong

Contributed by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

You said you really cared about me

I guess I was just to blind to see

That you never cared, feed me

Yes! Yet again i'm let down, yet again you have lied

I guess that's the price i have paid

A worthless ***** whom had it all

But now I have been knocked down, I no longer stand tall

The hurt and pain of the past are the only things I can recall

When I'm alone, shh no one knows, for I sit and squall

I'm sorry I want out of this

But what's really funny, you think I'm still lost with bliss

I no longer want to exist

I'm sick of bloodying my wrist

For when I do, I only come away with a few satisfying figurines

No more blood shall fill my veins

I shall finally have my turn

There is no need for any concern

I will not plan a return , for I do not intend to

This is true,

This is the last of my last word

I’m sorry this occurred

I’ve preached for far to long,

I can’t take it, I can’t be strong

Copyright Â© shrunkin_fool34142316 ... [ 2005-04-07 15:55:32]
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Re: I can't take it, I can't be strong (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:34:50 PM AEST
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you know what the first thing that came to my mind was when i read the title of your poem? Bull**it. im not syaing your pain isnt real and i dont know how you feel, im not putting you down or anything but...whatever your going through people have come out of worse. you cant be weak, if your weak you wont make it in this world. and thats a promise. but when you learn to be strong beucase you finally accept thikngs more, and actually would want to live life. it takes time but you can do it. suicide just isnt an option, its failing. and on your poem i think it was well written! you gave us a look inside your life and it was heartfelt, the emotions displyed for us very good. keep writing and STAY strong (you made it this far...you have to have some stength within you.)

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