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Array ( [sid] => 90245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => raise in la [time] => 2005-04-07 15:31:49 [hometext] => this a lil verse that i came up with on da spot so hit me back up to see how im doing so i can keep writing if yall b likeing my lyrics ~1~ late this ya boy tune [bodytext] => i was raised in la
no mercedes
lot of crying baby's
krews ******* up krews
I still steped in da hood
If i die let my body rest in peace
homeboys smoking weed
hustling to get the cheese
momma please dont cry
I've done bad on this world
yes im cursed
I rise up
Tune is blowing up da spot
**** a cop
pop's always wooped my back
It was addicting like crack
kick back as you take a peek of my past
take the weed i said i pass
not long ago
my dad still wooped my ***
was used to it so i laugh
momma told me to behave
but this world is driving me insane
lot of pain in my veins
my past wans't okay
March twelve
started smooking
dont want to be choking
I was raised in la
Ya'll haven't heard da whole story yet mayne [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 43 [informant] => TUNE [notes] => Mod. 9 bleep words 4/08/05 Please bleep the whole word. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

raise in la

Contributed by TUNE on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:31:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

i was raised in la
no mercedes
lot of crying baby's
krews ******* up krews
I still steped in da hood
If i die let my body rest in peace
homeboys smoking weed
hustling to get the cheese
momma please dont cry
I've done bad on this world
yes im cursed
I rise up
Tune is blowing up da spot
**** a cop
pop's always wooped my back
It was addicting like crack
kick back as you take a peek of my past
take the weed i said i pass
not long ago
my dad still wooped my ***
was used to it so i laugh
momma told me to behave
but this world is driving me insane
lot of pain in my veins
my past wans't okay
March twelve
started smooking
dont want to be choking
I was raised in la
Ya'll haven't heard da whole story yet mayne

Copyright © TUNE ... [ 2005-04-07 15:31:49]
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Re: raise in la (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:59:24 AM AEST
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Reminds me way to much of my friend miguel who supposedly was recently killed in a shootout in LA. Good write. Keep writing. Writing truly saves the soul

Re: raise in la (User Rating: 1 )
by PolarBear on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:30:50 PM AEST
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Very good poem. If you get the time check out my poetry the titles BYE and my name is PolarBear. Keep writing like the other comment said it saves the soul.

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