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Array ( [sid] => 90222 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => us together [time] => 2005-04-07 11:31:02 [hometext] => sry so long [bodytext] => as he wraps his arms around her waist
he speaks of love
of the future
talking of them

she never expected it to last
he never had a doubt thta it wouldnt
she liked him
he fell in love

she was hestitate
to give him a chance
he knew since they met
he could be in love

as he pulls her closer
he talks more softly
about his dreams
for them

she looks deep
into his big blue eyes
she sees his love for her
and honesty of it

as she puts an arm
around his neck
and the other
around his waist

she whispered softly
that she loved him
he looks at her
in astonishment

he takes a deep breath in
he moved closer
and said
you've always had my heart

shes shocked
that the words came outta her mouth
and his in return
and that she actually meant it

he told her
that he could spend
always w/ her
and that he wanted to

they both knew
she was afraid
afraid of commitment
but not now

their together now,
unbelievably happy
and more in love than ever

[comments] => 0 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => visualizing_life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

us together

Contributed by visualizing_life on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:31:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

as he wraps his arms around her waist
he speaks of love
of the future
talking of them

she never expected it to last
he never had a doubt thta it wouldnt
she liked him
he fell in love

she was hestitate
to give him a chance
he knew since they met
he could be in love

as he pulls her closer
he talks more softly
about his dreams
for them

she looks deep
into his big blue eyes
she sees his love for her
and honesty of it

as she puts an arm
around his neck
and the other
around his waist

she whispered softly
that she loved him
he looks at her
in astonishment

he takes a deep breath in
he moved closer
and said
you've always had my heart

shes shocked
that the words came outta her mouth
and his in return
and that she actually meant it

he told her
that he could spend
always w/ her
and that he wanted to

they both knew
she was afraid
afraid of commitment
but not now

their together now,
unbelievably happy
and more in love than ever

Copyright © visualizing_life ... [ 2005-04-07 11:31:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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