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and a presence rivaling a master's marble
Her footfalls pad softly beneath her grace

A wordly but gentle smile coyly spreads
Under the translucent gleam in her eyes
And her robe softly sighs onto the floor

The timeless play presents it's encore
And below a blue-black starred heaven
Silohuettes entwine in heated embrace

Limber flexing belies the loving tangle
Urgent caress and passionate lips meet
Eyes search intently for that telling flare

This dance expands, subtly glistening
Exploring, feeling, climbing, reaching
Salty sweet taste explodes in amazed joy

The porcelin moon presides yet again
So tenderly, the bright crescendo fades
Hot-breathed kisses quietly confirm it's pass [comments] => 4 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 2 [informant] => reprobate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

A Moment of Forever

Contributed by reprobate on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

With pale skin like smooth alabaster
and a presence rivaling a master's marble
Her footfalls pad softly beneath her grace

A wordly but gentle smile coyly spreads
Under the translucent gleam in her eyes
And her robe softly sighs onto the floor

The timeless play presents it's encore
And below a blue-black starred heaven
Silohuettes entwine in heated embrace

Limber flexing belies the loving tangle
Urgent caress and passionate lips meet
Eyes search intently for that telling flare

This dance expands, subtly glistening
Exploring, feeling, climbing, reaching
Salty sweet taste explodes in amazed joy

The porcelin moon presides yet again
So tenderly, the bright crescendo fades
Hot-breathed kisses quietly confirm it's pass

Copyright © reprobate ... [ 2005-04-06 23:14:08]
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Re: A Moment of Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:57:13 AM AEST
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Oh So beautiful words,- anouncing the climax of enchantment, - and no more "crescendo"
In God there is no end of "Crescendo" nor surprise.
A profound work this one.
Can say no more than "unfathomable and a limitless crescendo may very well be what man may expect - when HE takes over
Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: A Moment of Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:18:56 PM AEST
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Magnificent Michael. A sonata of love should be played over and over again until each note is permanently etched in the lover's minds. It should play again and again and each time they vary the tempo to adjust and reach new heights. It is after all their sonata of love and can rise or dim at their whim. This is so sensual yet delicate. You touched my senses with this.

Dove

Re: A Moment of Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 06:49:46 AM AEST
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Holy heck, I'm having to fan my freaking self. My god, Michael, stanza 6 about made Me "explode in amazed joy. *smiles*. Beautiful, sensual....I love this side of your writing.
Peace and hugs,
Me

Re: A Moment of Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 09:27:30 PM AEST
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mmm.. i have fallen into your gently flowing words, this beauty...
unconditional true loving, this freedom of souls, sometimes is never
known nor fully appreciated, in this most beautiful way, this is beauty!
truly! ...no one writes romance like you...

love n' hugs nessa

*reads it again*

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*one more time*

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