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Array ( [sid] => 90175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For You, Blue [time] => 2005-04-06 22:06:53 [hometext] => A smile for a friend, here's hoping it helps (apologies to the fab four re: the title) [bodytext] => And she was so sad tonight
This flower of joy and light
Wasn't the words she said
That she was, hung my head

A gentle being of kindness and caring
Seemingly endless in loving, in sharing
Blue does not become you, my dear
My words and wishes fail so, I fear

How may I replace that dismal gray
And return your smile of yesterday
What must I do, where do I look
To give back that which unkind hurt took

Sweet lady, tell me how to assist
That your pain will cease and desist
I'll hold you in my arms day and night
If that would help to keep you right

Dare I touch your heart so sweet
To banish all sadness complete
All that I have is this flowery song
To show that this blue is wrong [comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 48 [informant] => reprobate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

For You, Blue

Contributed by reprobate on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:06:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

And she was so sad tonight
This flower of joy and light
Wasn't the words she said
That she was, hung my head

A gentle being of kindness and caring
Seemingly endless in loving, in sharing
Blue does not become you, my dear
My words and wishes fail so, I fear

How may I replace that dismal gray
And return your smile of yesterday
What must I do, where do I look
To give back that which unkind hurt took

Sweet lady, tell me how to assist
That your pain will cease and desist
I'll hold you in my arms day and night
If that would help to keep you right

Dare I touch your heart so sweet
To banish all sadness complete
All that I have is this flowery song
To show that this blue is wrong

Copyright © reprobate ... [ 2005-04-06 22:06:53]
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Re: For You, Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Keila on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:10:10 PM AEST
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that is sweet i wish i had friends like you

Re: For You, Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:22:06 PM AEST
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Very touching, tender write.
huggs,
emy

Re: For You, Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:08:27 PM AEST
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Maybe in time if you can bring down the wall and never desert her or hurt her, she would love to be held in your arms. Maybe you could even share a candy bar????? Maybe someday? Maybe she is not sad, just afraid to open up to another dream that might fail. You write lovely words, CandyMan.

Dove

Re: For You, Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 07:03:03 AM AEST
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Michael,
Your words are soothing and gentle. These last lines were so wonderful....

"Dare I touch your heart so sweet
To banish all sadness complete
All that I have is this flowery song
To show that this blue is wrong"

Hmmm I know I treasure the songs you sing, my friend. You've a wonderful heart.
Peace, love and hugs,
Me

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