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Array ( [sid] => 90155 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Victim of Reality [time] => 2005-04-06 20:46:40 [hometext] => This is to all the haters and discriminaters...stop reproducing. [bodytext] => I'm a victim of reality
put down for my
conditions of abnormality.
You call me strange,
yet you're just the same.
Everyday I get labeled another name.
Why do I get critisized for all that I do?
I am who I am...
what's it to you?
Why does it matter if I live life to a different beat?
Why is that something you feel you have to defeat?
I see my pain reflecting in your own eyes.
This power and confidence, you know they're just lies.
You think I don't see it?
You think that I'm blind?
Your insecurities and fears, they're crossing a line.
So next time you push me deeper into the ground,
I hope you realize, what goes around comes around.
And maybe one day, you'll stop trying to make me just like you,
because the truth is...you're just a victim of reality too. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 21 [informant] => tinkerhell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Victim of Reality

Contributed by tinkerhell on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:46:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I'm a victim of reality
put down for my
conditions of abnormality.
You call me strange,
yet you're just the same.
Everyday I get labeled another name.
Why do I get critisized for all that I do?
I am who I am...
what's it to you?
Why does it matter if I live life to a different beat?
Why is that something you feel you have to defeat?
I see my pain reflecting in your own eyes.
This power and confidence, you know they're just lies.
You think I don't see it?
You think that I'm blind?
Your insecurities and fears, they're crossing a line.
So next time you push me deeper into the ground,
I hope you realize, what goes around comes around.
And maybe one day, you'll stop trying to make me just like you,
because the truth is...you're just a victim of reality too.




Copyright © tinkerhell ... [ 2005-04-06 20:46:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Victim of Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:49:49 PM AEST
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Couldn't have improved on what you write if one tried. Absolutely fantastic of a write. Your words speak loud and clearly. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.


Re: Victim of Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:55:54 PM AEST
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you were heard loud and clear.nicely done hit me up when you post more


Re: Victim of Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:06:37 PM AEST
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Ah.... "tinkerhell"! Thats a ***** great name, and the poem wasn't bad either. ^^


Re: Victim of Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:17:30 PM AEST
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Wisdom beauty artistry compassion have i

left anything out? oh yeh, a masterpeice . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Victim of Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:36:42 AM AEST
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awesome write, well done. amazing.




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