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Who'd have thought I'd feel like this?
To be full of nothing and lonliness
To feel it run so deep through me
Wonder should I drink this hemlock tea?
Could it fix all of the flaws
with a simple sip straight through the straw?

There was a time when I was fine
and felt alright inside my mind
But now I cannot sleep at night
Too busy having my self-fight
And being totally ensnared
by all of my haunting nightmares

Who'd have thought I'd get this far
only to watch myself fall apart?
I noticed it, but then ignored
And so my world's gray just like before
Couldn't sieze just what I saw,
can anybody hear my silent call? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 36 [informant] => thepumpkinking [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Faded Colors

Contributed by thepumpkinking on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:05:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

"Faded Colors"

Who'd have thought I'd feel like this?
To be full of nothing and lonliness
To feel it run so deep through me
Wonder should I drink this hemlock tea?
Could it fix all of the flaws
with a simple sip straight through the straw?

There was a time when I was fine
and felt alright inside my mind
But now I cannot sleep at night
Too busy having my self-fight
And being totally ensnared
by all of my haunting nightmares

Who'd have thought I'd get this far
only to watch myself fall apart?
I noticed it, but then ignored
And so my world's gray just like before
Couldn't sieze just what I saw,
can anybody hear my silent call?

Copyright © thepumpkinking ... [ 2005-04-06 18:05:42]
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Re: Faded Colors (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 07:31:29 PM AEST
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hun i know how many times people have said "I've been there" but i trully have. I reached my peak and fell. I lost myself badly because i messed with my head...its complicated but im still lost but im not in the state i was when i hit that peak or anytime before it...just set your mind to how you want to feel...its complicated lol but it can be done...

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: Faded Colors (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:08:26 PM AEST
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Good write I had flashes of the same thoughts feelings and uncertainity. Keep a stiff upper lip things well sort em selves out .

Whisper

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