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Array ( [sid] => 90118 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Break Up 2 Make Up [time] => 2005-04-06 13:46:53 [hometext] => I dedecate this poem to those couples who fight with each other,but know in their hearts that their love for each other,is what makes them get through problems together.Please comment afterwords [bodytext] => Tonight is the night I call it quits,I love you with all my heart,so much that I cannot no longer put you through this.
How could something so simple come between our love,it must of been predestained,because I can't get no answers from the heavens above.
I've never felt so alive when I held you in my arms,who would of thought by me opening up,would cause me so much harm.
Yeah we had our disagreements,but you tell me,didn't we always find a way to work things out,I never once questioned your love,not once was there ever a doubt.
Thank you for your beautiful smiles,and I'm sorry babe for drawing out nothing but your tears,losing you forever is something that came as a surprise to me,a fear.
Why have you continued to love this monster,have I not told you of my past,I'm always at battle with myself,cause this is a war that will forever last.
I know my words dont come off as they seem,but the truth is,I won't leave you,cause when I'm you,my heart doesn't bleed.
How can we both be so strong,but yet we don't have the strength to walk away,I guess thats when,"we live to fight another day,"comes into play. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 55 [informant] => THUGGIN4REAL [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Break Up 2 Make Up

Contributed by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:46:53 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Tonight is the night I call it quits,I love you with all my heart,so much that I cannot no longer put you through this.
How could something so simple come between our love,it must of been predestained,because I can't get no answers from the heavens above.
I've never felt so alive when I held you in my arms,who would of thought by me opening up,would cause me so much harm.
Yeah we had our disagreements,but you tell me,didn't we always find a way to work things out,I never once questioned your love,not once was there ever a doubt.
Thank you for your beautiful smiles,and I'm sorry babe for drawing out nothing but your tears,losing you forever is something that came as a surprise to me,a fear.
Why have you continued to love this monster,have I not told you of my past,I'm always at battle with myself,cause this is a war that will forever last.
I know my words dont come off as they seem,but the truth is,I won't leave you,cause when I'm you,my heart doesn't bleed.
How can we both be so strong,but yet we don't have the strength to walk away,I guess thats when,"we live to fight another day,"comes into play.

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Re: Break Up 2 Make Up (User Rating: 1 )
by mine_24 on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:36:37 PM AEST
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Where were you back in the day??? Your words hit my heart in ways that I never again thought were possible. Keep it up Greg. I knew you could do it!

Mariel

Re: Break Up 2 Make Up (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:56:15 PM AEST
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I like this.
It's lovely. It's nice to see someone who knows that fights are to be had, but they are not all bad.

The only problem with this, is maybe you need some more line breeaks.

Great write,
Phil

Re: Break Up 2 Make Up (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 05:35:49 PM AEST
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Yeah, I agree about the line breaks. I do think that this is a good write. My husband and I argue but we end up laughing at ourselves a lot; especially when we realize it's something really stupid that we got upset over to begin with....keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!

Carol

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