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Array ( [sid] => 90022 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blood on the floor [time] => 2005-04-05 19:34:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => why?
why did you do it?
why did you try?
i cant believe you wanted to die
i love you so much
i don't want you to be away from me
i can't imagine life without you
i kind of had a feeling
that something wasn't right
i wish i would have just spoke up
and asked you
and just hugged you
and loved you
but i'm not even sure
that would have changed your mind
why would you want to leave me
why would you want to go
you say you don't know why
so i guess i'll never know [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => candi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

blood on the floor

Contributed by candi on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 07:34:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

why?
why did you do it?
why did you try?
i cant believe you wanted to die
i love you so much
i don't want you to be away from me
i can't imagine life without you
i kind of had a feeling
that something wasn't right
i wish i would have just spoke up
and asked you
and just hugged you
and loved you
but i'm not even sure
that would have changed your mind
why would you want to leave me
why would you want to go
you say you don't know why
so i guess i'll never know

Copyright © candi ... [ 2005-04-05 19:34:24]
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Re: blood on the floor (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 07:41:28 PM AEST
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I've been on both ends of the spectrum. I'm sorry and hope that you get through this and end up being even closer to the person. Great write. I liked the format. It really helped the strength of your poem.

Re: blood on the floor (User Rating: 1 )
by His_3_Nails on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:06:52 AM AEST
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I undestand completely where you are coming from... This poem reminds me of myself and how I put my gurlfriend through that....

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