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Array ( [sid] => 90019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicidal [time] => 2005-04-05 19:13:29 [hometext] => this is 4 all of my suicidal friends, please stop doing this to yourselves, and please live life to the fullest. Don’t let all of the bad things get to u; it’s only high school, u have all of college and your social life ahead of u. I love all of u [bodytext] => Scrape, scratch
You try to cut yourself
But the object wasn’t sharp enough

Cut, slice
You find a sharper object
And slit your wrist

Drip, drop
The blood drips from your wrists
You start to realize what you did

Tear, sob
You start crying
about all the crap that’s been going on

Hope, wish
That someone will come
And help you stop

Scream, shout
You start screaming for help
Someone heard you, and comes.

Truth, lie
You don’t know what to tell them
When they ask you what happened

Look, shock
They see the sharp, bloody object next to you
And they start talking to you

Wipe, sob
You wipe the tears from your eyes
And thank the person that talked you out of it

Wounds, scars
You haven’t cut yourself since
But you still have the scars to remind you of that painful night

Xofireangel27
3/21/05 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xofireangel27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Suicidal

Contributed by xofireangel27 on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 07:13:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Scrape, scratch
You try to cut yourself
But the object wasn’t sharp enough

Cut, slice
You find a sharper object
And slit your wrist

Drip, drop
The blood drips from your wrists
You start to realize what you did

Tear, sob
You start crying
about all the crap that’s been going on

Hope, wish
That someone will come
And help you stop

Scream, shout
You start screaming for help
Someone heard you, and comes.

Truth, lie
You don’t know what to tell them
When they ask you what happened

Look, shock
They see the sharp, bloody object next to you
And they start talking to you

Wipe, sob
You wipe the tears from your eyes
And thank the person that talked you out of it

Wounds, scars
You haven’t cut yourself since
But you still have the scars to remind you of that painful night

Xofireangel27
3/21/05




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Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by Kami on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 07:21:03 PM AEST
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Very deep... but great! Definetly good to sue to explain to a friend not to do that stuff...


Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:36:33 PM AEST
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Detailed very well, hope many read this.

Nancy


Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by brokengirl on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:32:52 AM AEST
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very good and relates a lot to my life. thanx for posting.




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