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Array ( [sid] => 90006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Cold Inside [time] => 2005-04-05 16:34:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She stood still
Gazing up at the sky
Watching ripples in the clouds
Slowly pass her by

She doesn’t mind the tears that spill
The wind that blows through her hair
Its just what makes her feel
To grow so cold on the outside
Is what makes her slowly warmer inside

As the chills begin to move up her back
She doesn’t mind feeling it
It’s the only thing she’s felt in awhile
Maybe this time it’ll stay
The feelings…maybe they wont go away… [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 65 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

So Cold Inside

Contributed by pyrofungus on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 04:34:03 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

She stood still
Gazing up at the sky
Watching ripples in the clouds
Slowly pass her by

She doesn’t mind the tears that spill
The wind that blows through her hair
Its just what makes her feel
To grow so cold on the outside
Is what makes her slowly warmer inside

As the chills begin to move up her back
She doesn’t mind feeling it
It’s the only thing she’s felt in awhile
Maybe this time it’ll stay
The feelings…maybe they wont go away…

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Re: So Cold Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:46:54 PM AEST
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A simple but vivid piece, that expresses itself quite well. I like it.

Andrew
(thinking this poem needs more comments)

Re: So Cold Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by bibi on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:13:02 PM AEST
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i think this is a very good and expressive write. i could picture her standing there looking at the cold grey horizon. you have a way with words. short,simple but effective.

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