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[aid] => mick
[title] => Forgiven Soul
[time] => 2005-04-05 15:19:35
[hometext] => mistakes are made by everyone just some people are good enough to ask for forgiveness...plz comment
[bodytext] => I witnessed something today, a criminal was accepted above He was inside of the church, praying and looking for love His hands were folded tight, and tears were streaming down his face I heard him ask God, why he was born to this hateful place On his knees in the front, asking God for another chance Thinking about his past, he takes a second glance Seeing all the crime, and hateful things he's done But now he understands, why at heaven's gates he's not number one If he wouldn't have had that gun, especially on that day Then he might not have thrown half of his life away He has just gotten done, doing all of his time He had 25 to life, after a horrible crime He killed two innocent children, and their wonderful mother The trial lasted a long time, with the upset and fighting brother This man has kids back at home, but they don't know him Ever since he went to prison, his light has been really dim His loving wife is now depressed, because of the expensive bail She wishes everyday, that her husband never went to jail The both of them don't know how the kids will except their father And now with that thought in mind, the both of them are bothered Still sitting in the church, afraid of going home Feeling that his kids won't love him, feeling so alone But he knows that he has done a wrong, and he has paid the tole He committed a crime and did his time, he is a forgiven soul ~~~~~~~Kay-Kay~~~~~~~ [comments] => 1 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Kay-Kay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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