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Array ( [sid] => 89982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Promise [time] => 2005-04-05 13:31:22 [hometext] => Felt like writing and she's the only thing I ever think about so it's only natural that I write about her all of the time....comments are appreciated, thanks :) [bodytext] => I promise to love you for as long as I live,
In this life and in death too.
I promise to give you all that I can give,
I'll always be here for you.

I'm not going to let anything take you away,
my life means nothing without you.
With you I look forward to each new day,
it doesn't get any better than a love so true.

You tickle me, bite me, and mess up my hair,
and you love it how I don't get mad.
But that's because of the perfect love we share,
how can I get mad at the best I've ever had?

I love laying with you and watching you sleep,
your breath is music to my ears.
Those are moments I cherish and keep,
ones I'll never forget for all of our years.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Curtisc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I Promise

Contributed by Curtisc on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I promise to love you for as long as I live,
In this life and in death too.
I promise to give you all that I can give,
I'll always be here for you.

I'm not going to let anything take you away,
my life means nothing without you.
With you I look forward to each new day,
it doesn't get any better than a love so true.

You tickle me, bite me, and mess up my hair,
and you love it how I don't get mad.
But that's because of the perfect love we share,
how can I get mad at the best I've ever had?

I love laying with you and watching you sleep,
your breath is music to my ears.
Those are moments I cherish and keep,
ones I'll never forget for all of our years.

Copyright © Curtisc ... [ 2005-04-05 13:31:22]
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Re: I Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 03:48:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful declaration of love..
Jenni

Re: I Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:29:53 AM AEST
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Aww this was soooo heartfelt, I wanted to cry...but i didn't...lol. I really envy the love that u guys have for each other. It's great how u got ur feelings down on paper. Tanya

Re: I Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:57:29 PM AEST
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i really loved that poem, i almost cried. i know how you feel. love hurts but it is a wonderful feeling to have. anyways nice write, i loved it

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