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Inside your eyes the fairies weave,
Weave a spell of pure magic,
Take away all that’s dark & tragic.

As they whisper into my ear,
I look at you & away drift my fears,
I look longingly into your eyes,
Can you hear the angels & their heavenly cries?

I almost lost you once before,
But now with love I have settled the score,
Two people like who are in love,
Should be protected by the wings of a dove.

I can hear your heart as it beats,
Your loving wind sweeps me off my feet
Your warm body pressed close to mine,
Our love together once again shines.

There is a bond that we share,
It lets me know just how much you care,
I can’t believe I doubted it in the past,
Always deeps in my heart I knew it would last.
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As I Gently Breathe

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:23:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As I sit & gently breathe,
Inside your eyes the fairies weave,
Weave a spell of pure magic,
Take away all that’s dark & tragic.

As they whisper into my ear,
I look at you & away drift my fears,
I look longingly into your eyes,
Can you hear the angels & their heavenly cries?

I almost lost you once before,
But now with love I have settled the score,
Two people like who are in love,
Should be protected by the wings of a dove.

I can hear your heart as it beats,
Your loving wind sweeps me off my feet
Your warm body pressed close to mine,
Our love together once again shines.

There is a bond that we share,
It lets me know just how much you care,
I can’t believe I doubted it in the past,
Always deeps in my heart I knew it would last.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-04-05 08:23:27]
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Re: As I Gently Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 11:30:48 AM AEST
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This was nice, adorable, very sweet and it made me smile dreamily.

Kie

Re: As I Gently Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 04:13:54 PM AEST
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Sweet and beautiful like all Pixie creations.
Nicely done Krissie.

Jane

Re: As I Gently Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 08:51:26 PM AEST
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Beautifully done once again! Tanya

Re: As I Gently Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 09:51:57 PM AEST
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brilliant. i loved the last stanza. endings are the most important of a piece, and your ending make this masterpiece even more brilliant.

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