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Array ( [sid] => 899 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wonders Of The Heart [time] => 2002-07-21 21:53:38 [hometext] => This is where the world meets the heart, join me in seeing the sites.
The Phantom [bodytext] => Everyone told me go look at the ocean, it's so big,
So I took there advice and did,
And when I did I was disappointed,
I look at my friend and said that's not an ocean,

I said this is nothing more then a puddle in the ground,
He look at me with a frown,
I said I'll tell you about an ocean, let me tell you about the tears I cried,
When my girl said goodbye,

Then they said go look at the Grand Canyon, it's so big,
So I took their advice and did,
When I did, I was let down
I told my friend this nothing but a hole in the ground,

You want to see a canyon let me tell you about my heart,
And what happend when she tore my world apart,
Then they said go see the Rocky Mountians, their great,
I took their advice, but I did hesitate,

And when I did I begain to cry,
I told my friend that's nothing but sand piled high,
If you want to see a mountian that's great,
How about me getting over her, and the climb I had to make.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 1 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 60 [ratings] => 12 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Wonders Of The Heart

Contributed by The_Phantom on Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 09:53:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Everyone told me go look at the ocean, it's so big,
So I took there advice and did,
And when I did I was disappointed,
I look at my friend and said that's not an ocean,

I said this is nothing more then a puddle in the ground,
He look at me with a frown,
I said I'll tell you about an ocean, let me tell you about the tears I cried,
When my girl said goodbye,

Then they said go look at the Grand Canyon, it's so big,
So I took their advice and did,
When I did, I was let down
I told my friend this nothing but a hole in the ground,

You want to see a canyon let me tell you about my heart,
And what happend when she tore my world apart,
Then they said go see the Rocky Mountians, their great,
I took their advice, but I did hesitate,

And when I did I begain to cry,
I told my friend that's nothing but sand piled high,
If you want to see a mountian that's great,
How about me getting over her, and the climb I had to make.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom

Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2002-07-21 21:53:38]
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Re: Wonders Of The Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:18:01 AM AEST
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What a way to put your heartache into a more understanding perspective! Great piece!

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