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Array ( [sid] => 89859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Night my broken heart died [time] => 2005-04-04 16:09:56 [hometext] => wrote this the night i lost it... tommy another one for you baby ...i still feel you here... [bodytext] => The clocks tics quater past three
the sun shines bright
heat beats down on my face
I drive just to feel free
my mind drifts back to a time
when you held me tight
when all things depart but my memory
all emotions slip past me
I once gave my love to some one
who returned it all to me
but one day it all slipped away
I begged god to let him stay
but it wasn't in his plan
now i must learn to understand
why you were swept away
and so many who cause pain are left here
and my life was sucked dry of all cheer
each day it gets eaiser to see
why our love that was meant to be
but now i learn to love
someone new but there is none
and lovers games are all gone
i took the knife to my wrist
and drawed one drop of blood
i felt your presence here
touching my heart and releasing all fear
in that instant i knew it would be alright
but for my life i must fight
so i released the knife
curled up adn cried
for tonight my broken heart died [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 48 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Night my broken heart died

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The clocks tics quater past three
the sun shines bright
heat beats down on my face
I drive just to feel free
my mind drifts back to a time
when you held me tight
when all things depart but my memory
all emotions slip past me
I once gave my love to some one
who returned it all to me
but one day it all slipped away
I begged god to let him stay
but it wasn't in his plan
now i must learn to understand
why you were swept away
and so many who cause pain are left here
and my life was sucked dry of all cheer
each day it gets eaiser to see
why our love that was meant to be
but now i learn to love
someone new but there is none
and lovers games are all gone
i took the knife to my wrist
and drawed one drop of blood
i felt your presence here
touching my heart and releasing all fear
in that instant i knew it would be alright
but for my life i must fight
so i released the knife
curled up adn cried
for tonight my broken heart died




Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-04-04 16:09:56]
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Re: Night my broken heart died (User Rating: 1 )
by Brownie on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:23:44 PM AEST
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you are really talented, i'm really feelin this poem...




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