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I should’ve listened to them
For every time that I tried to deny it
It got worse and worse
He abused me
But I thought that I loved him
I guess I didn’t
I should’ve listened to my friends
He lied to me
He used me
But I guess he didn’t cheat
But how do you know that’s the truth?
Just because he said so?
That’s not a good enough reason
But I should’ve said no
So many times that I didn’t
And it got worse every time I tried
I should’ve broke it off
But I was too scared
Because I thought it was love
But it was just lust
And scared of getting beat
So I should tell my friends I’m sorry
Because all of them
They were all right
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They were right

Contributed by BabyTears89 on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:28:50 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

They were right
I should’ve listened to them
For every time that I tried to deny it
It got worse and worse
He abused me
But I thought that I loved him
I guess I didn’t
I should’ve listened to my friends
He lied to me
He used me
But I guess he didn’t cheat
But how do you know that’s the truth?
Just because he said so?
That’s not a good enough reason
But I should’ve said no
So many times that I didn’t
And it got worse every time I tried
I should’ve broke it off
But I was too scared
Because I thought it was love
But it was just lust
And scared of getting beat
So I should tell my friends I’m sorry
Because all of them
They were all right

Copyright Â© BabyTears89 ... [ 2005-04-04 02:28:50]
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Re: They were right (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetoccasion29 on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:28:27 AM AEST
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at times we allow our hearts to hide the truth from ourselves,when truth comes to light its a breath of fresh air great write

Re: They were right (User Rating: 1 )
by FearMyRawr on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:44:59 PM AEST
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Truth does not always hold happiness and happiness does not always hold truth.

Nice write, hun!

Loves, xoxo
Leigha

Re: They were right (User Rating: 1 )
by PolarBear on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:06:29 PM AEST
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Good write. I hope you write more poems.

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