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Array ( [sid] => 89794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I love you, Now leave [time] => 2005-04-04 00:36:37 [hometext] => For that woman who is stuck on a man... [bodytext] => Hey I was just wondering,
When the HECK are you gonna leave!
No, it’s not that I don’t love you,
I just can’t BREATHE
You ASKED me to give you a DAY or so,
But you still. Won’t. GO!
Okay well let me TELL you again,
I just want US to be FRIENDS
Wait, wait, don’t START throwing my stuff,
I just simple had about ENOUGH.
Now you know, the GUN isn’t gonna help the situation
Your just ADDING on to the INFLAMMATION.
NO! we can’t TALK about US,
I simply LOST all trust,
I mean DAMN, you did SLEEP with my BROTHER Rust.
How did that HAPPEN by accident!?
What? You SLIP, TRIP and fell on his ****br /> You know your CRYING is gonna do no good,
YES woman did love, well, ACTUALLY, I hoped I could..
LOOK, we talked long ENOUGH,
NO! woman you can’t come BACK and get your STUFF,
I just want you to LEAVE go,
My WIFE will be back in a HOUR or so.

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I love you, Now leave

Contributed by discantbelife on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:36:37 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Hey I was just wondering,
When the HECK are you gonna leave!
No, it’s not that I don’t love you,
I just can’t BREATHE
You ASKED me to give you a DAY or so,
But you still. Won’t. GO!
Okay well let me TELL you again,
I just want US to be FRIENDS
Wait, wait, don’t START throwing my stuff,
I just simple had about ENOUGH.
Now you know, the GUN isn’t gonna help the situation
Your just ADDING on to the INFLAMMATION.
NO! we can’t TALK about US,
I simply LOST all trust,
I mean DAMN, you did SLEEP with my BROTHER Rust.
How did that HAPPEN by accident!?
What? You SLIP, TRIP and fell on his ****br /> You know your CRYING is gonna do no good,
YES woman did love, well, ACTUALLY, I hoped I could..
LOOK, we talked long ENOUGH,
NO! woman you can’t come BACK and get your STUFF,
I just want you to LEAVE go,
My WIFE will be back in a HOUR or so.

Copyright Â© discantbelife ... [ 2005-04-04 00:36:37]
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Re: I love you, Now leave (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetoccasion29 on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:38:32 AM AEST
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i can relate,i married a man I wanted to go
some people cant take a hint ,great write

Re: I love you, Now leave (User Rating: 1 )
by ipanema_gal on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:51:07 PM AEST
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well i really liked this it showed rage and told a story i applaud you

Re: I love you, Now leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:14:40 AM AEST
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Clever, with just enough hints of truth to not become absurd. Sounds a bit like a Jerry Springer scenario, though. I hope you aren't living it.

I like how you've structured and presented this one. The last line was a particularly good punchline.

Spike

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