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Array ( [sid] => 89659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Heartache [time] => 2005-04-02 14:40:49 [hometext] => My boyfriend broke up with me yesterday, the pain is immense. This is my second hearbreak, I gave this guy all of me... [bodytext] => You claim I make you misreable,
Well, what on earth did I do?
I dont recall acting crazy,
I remember being good to you.

I cant believe you pulled this,
Why did you go and break my heart?
Once again im mauled to shards,
Left alone and torn apart.

You finally won my trust,
You're the first person I let in.
I bet you have no idea,
How much this hurts within.

I gave you my all,
My body, my heart, my soul.
When I was with you my spirit soared,
I finally felt whole.

I had come to the conclusion,
That I knew I loved you so.
That Id be willing to do anything,
To make you not go.

But obviously that wasnt enough,
I clearly wasnt good enough for you.
I wish that you could see,
What hell you're putting me through.

Im trying to change,
I'll be whatever you want me to be.
And I'll do whatever you want me to do,
You just wait and see.

I just dont understand,
Why things had to be this way.
Why did I make you misreable,
Why couldnt I make you stay?

Ive come to the realization,
Im just not meant to feel.
Love is not my destiny,
I know now, love isnt real.

What did I do,
Where did things go wrong?
I just dont understand,
Why you had to say 'so long'.

Well, now I feel unwhole,
I'll just go and cry.
I just dont understand,
So please tell me why.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Pats4eva7 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Another Heartache

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:40:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You claim I make you misreable,
Well, what on earth did I do?
I dont recall acting crazy,
I remember being good to you.

I cant believe you pulled this,
Why did you go and break my heart?
Once again im mauled to shards,
Left alone and torn apart.

You finally won my trust,
You're the first person I let in.
I bet you have no idea,
How much this hurts within.

I gave you my all,
My body, my heart, my soul.
When I was with you my spirit soared,
I finally felt whole.

I had come to the conclusion,
That I knew I loved you so.
That Id be willing to do anything,
To make you not go.

But obviously that wasnt enough,
I clearly wasnt good enough for you.
I wish that you could see,
What hell you're putting me through.

Im trying to change,
I'll be whatever you want me to be.
And I'll do whatever you want me to do,
You just wait and see.

I just dont understand,
Why things had to be this way.
Why did I make you misreable,
Why couldnt I make you stay?

Ive come to the realization,
Im just not meant to feel.
Love is not my destiny,
I know now, love isnt real.

What did I do,
Where did things go wrong?
I just dont understand,
Why you had to say 'so long'.

Well, now I feel unwhole,
I'll just go and cry.
I just dont understand,
So please tell me why.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-04-02 14:40:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Another Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:42:33 PM AEST
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a breakup is so difficult, i feel for ya.great poem

Re: Another Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:54:05 PM AEST
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I can so relate to this write, it's powerful and emotive.
Well done on displaying such raw emotions into it.

Jane

Re: Another Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:22:06 PM AEST
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Amen to that.
"Ive come to the realization,
Im just not meant to feel.
Love is not my destiny,
I know now, love isnt real."

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