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Array ( [sid] => 8965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Thoughts of Love [time] => 2002-12-20 23:40:00 [hometext] => Well...my wife and I sat down and printed up all the poems I have written...I couldnt believe it, I had written 65 poems in the last 4 months. I guess the next thing I need to do, is figure out how to get them published. Well here is another one, one of my first. I hope everyone likes it too. Someone suggested that I write more than 4 line stanzas, however that is the format I like and I think I will stick to it. Thank you for the suggestion though. Maybe one day Ill do something different. [bodytext] => I sat alone at night,
Staring at the stars.
All I could think about,
Was this relationship of ours.

I thanked my lucky star above,
For you are in my life.
I even got down on my knees,
And thanked God you’re my wife.

I wondered if your having fun,
Or if you’re feeling sad.
I thought about you coming home,
And that made me really glad.

I pictured your smiling face,
Within my lonely mind.
I thought about what we would do,
When together we entwined.

I wondered why I felt lonely,
When I had you in my heart.
I realized I’m never alone,
Even we when have to part.

I thought about many things,
While staring at the sky.
Like how I could show to you,
That I love your beautiful eyes.

Perhaps I could find a way,
To explain the chills I get.
Or maybe I could tell to you,
How you hand and mine perfectly fit.

As long as you and I are one,
The world is at our feet.
For you are my one and true soulmate,
You are the reason I am complete.

I went to bed that night,
With my thoughts of only you.
Somewhere in the night I had a dream,
It was about how our love grew.

I hope you take this poem to heart,
And the feelings that lay within.
For when you get back to our home,
We will start our love again.
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Thoughts of Love

Contributed by FireStorm12 on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I sat alone at night,
Staring at the stars.
All I could think about,
Was this relationship of ours.

I thanked my lucky star above,
For you are in my life.
I even got down on my knees,
And thanked God you’re my wife.

I wondered if your having fun,
Or if you’re feeling sad.
I thought about you coming home,
And that made me really glad.

I pictured your smiling face,
Within my lonely mind.
I thought about what we would do,
When together we entwined.

I wondered why I felt lonely,
When I had you in my heart.
I realized I’m never alone,
Even we when have to part.

I thought about many things,
While staring at the sky.
Like how I could show to you,
That I love your beautiful eyes.

Perhaps I could find a way,
To explain the chills I get.
Or maybe I could tell to you,
How you hand and mine perfectly fit.

As long as you and I are one,
The world is at our feet.
For you are my one and true soulmate,
You are the reason I am complete.

I went to bed that night,
With my thoughts of only you.
Somewhere in the night I had a dream,
It was about how our love grew.

I hope you take this poem to heart,
And the feelings that lay within.
For when you get back to our home,
We will start our love again.




Copyright © FireStorm12 ... [ 2002-12-20 23:40:00]
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Re: Thoughts of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:07:42 AM AEST
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Well I personaly like the way you right,So keep it up,Great peice here by the way,very romantic,your wife would melt! Christina


Re: Thoughts of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 03:20:54 AM AEST
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Now how in the world could she not take t his poem to heart....my god it's breathtaking.....ok i have somthing to say here and im sureeeeeee your not going to like it but here goes ...ahem....I WANT TO READ EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THOSE 65 POEMS!!!!!! LOL now see it pays to listen to your wife she knew what she was talking about when she told you to post your poems hehe..this really is a beautiful write....i would have cried so hard if someone would have given me a poem like this ...thanks for sharing it...and i will certainly be looking for the next poems so neener neener you gotta write more now LOL...
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