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Tell Me A Story
Contributed by
freckle
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:40:55 AM in AEST
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Tell Me A Story
Tell me a story clever
about a love so rare
Talk of the times they gathered
strong man and damsel fair
Tell me how all the world
tried to keep them, at bay
But the love that they felt
Filled their heart, and does so still today
Tell me of days gone by
when clandestined so, they touched
How with a wink of his eye
She knew he loved her so much
Don't tell me how love died
how the two grew to hate as well
Don't tell me of bitter goodbyes
of hearts sunk deep into hell
Don't tell me how the world
closed tightly around like a noose
How things ripped the two apart
and now, they both must lose
I want a clever story
of a love that beats in eternity
I want to hear that story
and I want that love for me.
Carol 4/2/05
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:42:44 AM AEST
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| A very clever poem...and I agree with it completely....I want to hear about the real loves, that go on forever. Wonderful expression. Best of luck on the search. |
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:02:36 PM AEST
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This is cute. I love the idea of a 'love story' such as this.
I think this was really good.. the second stanza was a little difficult but still worked well.
Fantastic write, Carol.
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:37:30 PM AEST
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awww that was lovely, cute and sweet,
pix xx |
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:43:26 PM AEST
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HOW TOUCHING THAT WAS I GOT WRAPT
IN IT VERY BEAUTIFUL POETRY CAROL ON
A BEAUTIFUL SUBJECT . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:35:40 PM AEST
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Carol!! Well done!
I love the sentiment behind this!
(and psssttt...do you think its out there???) |
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:41:04 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 03:04:34 PM AEST
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Carol, this was such an incredible fun loving, sweet, romantic & joyfull write.
I sure do hope that this kind of love is out there.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by Archie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:56:05 PM AEST
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| This is a really inspiring poem. I often feel like this. I think this is a poem many can relate to. |
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Re: Tell Me A Story
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:09:00 PM AEST
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Ah, well spoken! Those stories don't happen in actuality often enough to suit any of us, I think. But they do happen. Thank God for that.
Andrew |
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