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Array ( [sid] => 89600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing [time] => 2005-04-01 16:06:31 [hometext] => This poem is Short but it has a lot of meaning. Please Coment! GODBLESS [bodytext] => As I sit here thinking
about what Im going to do next
I think really hard........
But it is just to complex.
Im lost. I have nothing. No where to go.

As I look far into the sky
I think how high, I could possibly fly.
Feeling free, wind blowing through my hair.
Just not to give one care.
REALITY CHECK
Not possible, can i ever feel free?
Can I justt relax? Can I ever be normal?
NO! Feeling these feelings is impossible.
I have given up.
( If feeling these feelings was possible than that means the whole world would be sain) [comments] => 5 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 13 [informant] => BEBE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Nothing

Contributed by BEBE on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:06:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As I sit here thinking
about what Im going to do next
I think really hard........
But it is just to complex.
Im lost. I have nothing. No where to go.

As I look far into the sky
I think how high, I could possibly fly.
Feeling free, wind blowing through my hair.
Just not to give one care.
REALITY CHECK
Not possible, can i ever feel free?
Can I justt relax? Can I ever be normal?
NO! Feeling these feelings is impossible.
I have given up.
( If feeling these feelings was possible than that means the whole world would be sain)

Copyright © BEBE ... [ 2005-04-01 16:06:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Vistar on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:23:45 PM AEST
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Woah. Great poetry. It really expresses your inner emotions, I can tell.

Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:35:53 AM AEST
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL PEICE OF POETRY IT'S

CONCEPT IT SO HONEST AND U WEAVE AN

HONEST PICTURE LIKE A LOST BUT RARE

WORK OF ART . . .

DORIAN CHAMBERS

Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:31:29 PM AEST
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Strong write
Freedom is spirit it is helping others
it is the giving of ourselves for the greater good og God.
"What ever you d for the leastof these you do for Me" Jesus Crist
You have good ideas keep writing.

Sinned

Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Mallard8 on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:22:57 AM AEST
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That was deep... has a different meaning to every person I think....

Sc

Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Mallard8 on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:22:57 AM AEST
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That was deep... has a different meaning to every person I think....

Sc

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