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Tryin hurdling my life
You wanna see me broken
My mind soul totally shrivells
No respite
my life in boundless evils.
My face once in eternal smiles
But world's envies there belies

I am lost, am broken
Lost in dark spectre
Its a one way to be vanquish
Life's in groans,
wizened eyes in anguish

People i used to trust
Its raw hatred in their hearts crust

Alike my family members
now they turn their eyes
They are smiling
Leaving me in cries

I have been target
Stone in their eyes

Life's been a flop squib
there's no spice
Am perfectly wizened
Once i used to fly

Feeling insecure,
My mind in fears
Am feeling lonely
But there's noone near

Thanks a lot

Naveen Kumar [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => naveen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

No respite:::From Groans and Cries........................

Contributed by naveen on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tryin hurdling my life
You wanna see me broken
My mind soul totally shrivells
No respite
my life in boundless evils.
My face once in eternal smiles
But world's envies there belies

I am lost, am broken
Lost in dark spectre
Its a one way to be vanquish
Life's in groans,
wizened eyes in anguish

People i used to trust
Its raw hatred in their hearts crust

Alike my family members
now they turn their eyes
They are smiling
Leaving me in cries

I have been target
Stone in their eyes

Life's been a flop squib
there's no spice
Am perfectly wizened
Once i used to fly

Feeling insecure,
My mind in fears
Am feeling lonely
But there's noone near

Thanks a lot

Naveen Kumar

Copyright © naveen ... [ 2005-04-01 06:32:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No respite:::From Groans and Cries........................ (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 08:15:49 AM AEST
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Emotional write.
I hold you in the palm of my hand."GOD"
He hears our moan and groansn they are prayer to Him.
Keep writing

Sinned

Re: No respite:::From Groans and Cries........................ (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:07:14 AM AEST
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very deep write.well done.

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