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Array ( [sid] => 89554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Closed Doors [time] => 2005-04-01 03:36:16 [hometext] => Wrote this a while ago [bodytext] => Behind closed doors we lock our things away,
Behind closed doors we hide from others,
Things we regret and things we despise,
All hidden from the cruel world's blind eyes.

Place your ear against the door and listen,
Truely listen to what they are saying,
And beyond the door you shall see,
All the truth visable wihout a key.

You locked the door to keep things hidden.
Never opened, never released,
But now which side do you reside,
You have locked your only exit.

Locking a door to hide away,
Not wanting to face the cruel cold world,
Hiding yourself in your prison of misery,
But please reopen before you lose your key.

Doors you lock to keep things hidden,
Doors you lock to hide away,
Doors you lock to keep things in,
All just locked for delusions of safety. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => poison_touch666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Closed Doors

Contributed by poison_touch666 on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 03:36:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Behind closed doors we lock our things away,
Behind closed doors we hide from others,
Things we regret and things we despise,
All hidden from the cruel world's blind eyes.

Place your ear against the door and listen,
Truely listen to what they are saying,
And beyond the door you shall see,
All the truth visable wihout a key.

You locked the door to keep things hidden.
Never opened, never released,
But now which side do you reside,
You have locked your only exit.

Locking a door to hide away,
Not wanting to face the cruel cold world,
Hiding yourself in your prison of misery,
But please reopen before you lose your key.

Doors you lock to keep things hidden,
Doors you lock to hide away,
Doors you lock to keep things in,
All just locked for delusions of safety.

Copyright © poison_touch666 ... [ 2005-04-01 03:36:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Closed Doors (User Rating: 1 )
by sean88 on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:31:53 AM AEST
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I liked this alot.I thought there was a really good message within this.I personally used to keep things locked away but since i stopped doing that i've been happier.Lovely write.

sean xxx

Re: Closed Doors (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 07:56:58 AM AEST
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very strongly written. doors, doors and more doors...I liked it. I still like to hide myself from the world sometimes. Keep it up.

Re: Closed Doors (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:50:12 AM AEST
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Good write. I enjoyed this.Sad Thoughts and Mixed feelings came through on each verse. I really enjoyed the read.

Whisper

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