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Array ( [sid] => 89418 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => friendship lost [time] => 2005-03-31 00:36:54 [hometext] => a couple lines may not make sense because they are insiders with the friend im talking about but i think the rest is pretty easy to understand [bodytext] => We were such great friends before
But now we’ve grown apart
It seems like we’ve closed the door
And it truly breaks my heart.
We could always make each other smile
As we spent time together
I thought our great friendship would last a while
But it’s changed, just like the weather
As I look back on all the fun times we’ve had
I sit here and smile as I cry
I think about our grade eight grad
Man time does really fly.
If we could go back to then
When we had time for fun
I remember back again
When we’d play out in the sun
You were the friend I could tell anything to
And I knew I could trust
You were the friend I stuck to like glue
Who knew our friendship would blow away with the dust?
Do you remember the good times?
Did they mean as much to you?
Do you still think of them sometimes?
Because I sure do.
Can we go back,
To the way it was last year?
Our friendship was on track
But now it has disappeared.
I don’t want to lose your friendship
You’re the best friend I’ve got
You’re better than leaving on a chip (insider)
Which really means a lot
I just want to say
I miss what we had
I wish we hadn’t gone astray
It makes me kind of sad.
I think we will always remember
The fun times we’ve had
Even if we aren’t still together
For what we had, I’m glad.







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friendship lost

Contributed by brokengirl on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:36:54 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



We were such great friends before
But now we’ve grown apart
It seems like we’ve closed the door
And it truly breaks my heart.
We could always make each other smile
As we spent time together
I thought our great friendship would last a while
But it’s changed, just like the weather
As I look back on all the fun times we’ve had
I sit here and smile as I cry
I think about our grade eight grad
Man time does really fly.
If we could go back to then
When we had time for fun
I remember back again
When we’d play out in the sun
You were the friend I could tell anything to
And I knew I could trust
You were the friend I stuck to like glue
Who knew our friendship would blow away with the dust?
Do you remember the good times?
Did they mean as much to you?
Do you still think of them sometimes?
Because I sure do.
Can we go back,
To the way it was last year?
Our friendship was on track
But now it has disappeared.
I don’t want to lose your friendship
You’re the best friend I’ve got
You’re better than leaving on a chip (insider)
Which really means a lot
I just want to say
I miss what we had
I wish we hadn’t gone astray
It makes me kind of sad.
I think we will always remember
The fun times we’ve had
Even if we aren’t still together
For what we had, I’m glad.











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Re: friendship lost (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:44:10 AM AEST
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Hmmm....very heartfelt...I like the poem...I can really feel your meaning in this...I hope all is good for you.

Clark


Re: friendship lost (User Rating: 1 )
by russ-dawg on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:44:29 AM AEST
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thats a good poem and i know how much it hurts when a friendship falls apart (sorry you lost your friend)


Re: friendship lost (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST
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Heya hotstuff...good to see ya on the site! :) lol, so yeah, I know how you feel,
it hurts to remember the good times of a friendship that aren't there anymore.
I feel you.
:P *HUGS* I like seeing your writing skills develop hun.

~Waos/Kara


Re: friendship lost (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:38:12 PM AEST
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yea old friend bring back good laugh i also
remember my day when i was young and miss
my friend, your poem is very nice it remind me of my friend back home good luck it great poem..


Re: friendship lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:10:18 AM AEST
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A memory as it should be. Not held in hate or anger, remmbering the heartbreaks, but remembering the things that held it together. If that makes sense, it is 1:58am here.
Take care.
David




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