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Array ( [sid] => 89379 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Just Want to Live [time] => 2005-03-30 19:22:49 [hometext] => I finally got some freakin inspiration. i swear i havent written n e thing since january. please please please take the time to comment on thnx bye [bodytext] =>

I want the world to stop turning,
I want it all to end,
I want everything and everyone to stop and leave,
I want my innocence back,
I want the feeling of happiness to come and take me away,
I want to feel joy and excitement all over again,
I dont want to be lost in depression and darkness anymore,
I want to come out of the shadows and back into the light,
I'm tired of being pill reliant,
I'm tired of being razor dependent,
I just want my fairytale ending,
where I can finally say that I lived happily ever after without having to lie to myself,
I just want some kind of stability,
some kid of controll over myself,
I just want to be ok,
I just want live the way I was meant to live,
there is no happy endings in my future [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => humboldtsweetie33 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I Just Want to Live

Contributed by humboldtsweetie33 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:22:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry





I want the world to stop turning,
I want it all to end,
I want everything and everyone to stop and leave,
I want my innocence back,
I want the feeling of happiness to come and take me away,
I want to feel joy and excitement all over again,
I dont want to be lost in depression and darkness anymore,
I want to come out of the shadows and back into the light,
I'm tired of being pill reliant,
I'm tired of being razor dependent,
I just want my fairytale ending,
where I can finally say that I lived happily ever after without having to lie to myself,
I just want some kind of stability,
some kid of controll over myself,
I just want to be ok,
I just want live the way I was meant to live,
there is no happy endings in my future




Copyright © humboldtsweetie33 ... [ 2005-03-30 19:22:49]
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Re: I Just Want to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:28:21 PM AEST
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woah this is a very emotional piece and im liking it. i can relate to the things you wish and the longing for happiness and wanting to be ok.
its sad but still kinda hopeful.....well done
all my hope rach x


Re: I Just Want to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:38:41 PM AEST
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You said that you have'nt written since January...You say in your poem , " I want to come out of the shadows and back into the light " .Great that you crossed that bridge and that you are writing again!Keep writing...


Re: I Just Want to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by unrestrained19 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:39:31 PM AEST
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wow this one touched me speechless!!!!!
my favorite lines:
I want to come out of the shadows and back into the light,
I'm tired of being pill reliant,
I'm tired of being razor dependent,
I just want my fairytale ending,
where I can finally say that I lived happily ever after without having to lie to myself,
excellent glad you got some inspiration...please keep going!!!!!!


Re: I Just Want to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:41:12 PM AEST
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this is ur best poem i've read, which means it's great! I feel exactly the same way.




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