Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 18:43:34 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 8934 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Numeretic [time] => 2002-12-20 14:40:00 [hometext] => Words from the old site (29th May 2002) [bodytext] => Use two backpacks to pin me back back,
Severity left 3 legged and race in sack sack.
Mouse dangers got the taunt taunt for green back,
One stern word parade, been there there done that.

I’m almost I know free speak show and let go,
Not silky low low tonic clamber flow flow.
Shave shave a dull day dimmer now that’s a no no,
Climatic tyrant tyrant is good to go go.

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.

And I wish, I wish, I wish, I wish,
That this sordid gift could just lift through mist.
And I bring to this, and I’ll bring to Mister,
Help me drop rock rocks, scale Richter.

I bought you freedom, free dumb and wood sticks,
Pass pass me half half of steel stain bricks.
One two three four five six, six,
Prime number dumber and I’m left with this.

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.

Timid timid sent to bring it, sifted,
Went to castle and ban lifted lifted.
Specific screen, hello hello and halo fourteen,
To keep them play play just keep them clean.

Cargo cargo full with holes holes,
Asked or expected to cold the troll trolls.
Who’s there, who’s left to pay pay my bail,
Undone livid rivets shift pent up snail snail.

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.

Reeds reeds a tick tock tick tock dancy ticks,
Stop stop with your leaned on fancy mix.
Game game too hard hard the difficulty,
To shape too late sold out out unity.

Blue light the sent and labeled horn horn,
Pie graph, pie nap and sea kelp torn torn.
Someone careless left left behind,
How hard hard is it to hold on to time?

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Damon_Maynard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Numeretic

Contributed by Damon_Maynard on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Use two backpacks to pin me back back,
Severity left 3 legged and race in sack sack.
Mouse dangers got the taunt taunt for green back,
One stern word parade, been there there done that.

I’m almost I know free speak show and let go,
Not silky low low tonic clamber flow flow.
Shave shave a dull day dimmer now that’s a no no,
Climatic tyrant tyrant is good to go go.

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.

And I wish, I wish, I wish, I wish,
That this sordid gift could just lift through mist.
And I bring to this, and I’ll bring to Mister,
Help me drop rock rocks, scale Richter.

I bought you freedom, free dumb and wood sticks,
Pass pass me half half of steel stain bricks.
One two three four five six, six,
Prime number dumber and I’m left with this.

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.

Timid timid sent to bring it, sifted,
Went to castle and ban lifted lifted.
Specific screen, hello hello and halo fourteen,
To keep them play play just keep them clean.

Cargo cargo full with holes holes,
Asked or expected to cold the troll trolls.
Who’s there, who’s left to pay pay my bail,
Undone livid rivets shift pent up snail snail.

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.

Reeds reeds a tick tock tick tock dancy ticks,
Stop stop with your leaned on fancy mix.
Game game too hard hard the difficulty,
To shape too late sold out out unity.

Blue light the sent and labeled horn horn,
Pie graph, pie nap and sea kelp torn torn.
Someone careless left left behind,
How hard hard is it to hold on to time?

I’m missing and
I’m hitting and
I’m getting so
Ready ready.

Copyright Â© Damon_Maynard ... [ 2002-12-20 14:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Numeretic (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 02:43:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I got some lyrical senses out of this one....it's definately different and has it's own style....it's unique...thanks for sharing this one...i enjoyed it..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Numeretic (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 04:05:00 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"I?m missing and I?m hitting and I?m getting so Ready ready" sounds like where is everybody from NIN...
maybe that's just me. i like the repeating words in the mix, it adds rythm to it all, gives character too!! rocking damon!! kudos! ;0)
-daniel

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com