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Array ( [sid] => 89326 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Would Jesus Do [time] => 2005-03-30 11:20:46 [hometext] => Its been a while since I've posted anything, I hope you enjoy, Woody [bodytext] => I look around at others,
At some in dire need,
The lonely, lost, or fathers,
With children they can’t feed.

Life has changed, seems no one cares,
For the child on the street,
The mother doing her best to share,
Who only met defeat.

Those who live in sickness,
All hope is now despair,
Could there be some light in darkness,
If we found some time to share.

I think about the wealthy
Walking lost in self-esteem,
Wrapped up in their money,
With a pauper can’t be seen.

I was taught to be polite
And lend a helping hand.
To give it all with all my might,
That I might firmly stand.

Has life, as we know it really changed?
That we no longer share,
Has life become so rearranged?
That we’re not supposed to care?

Take time to help the down at heart
Life’s complicated this is true,
So ask yourself as each day starts,
What would Jesus do?

Woody McDaniel
Copywrite 2005
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What Would Jesus Do

Contributed by WoodyMc44 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:20:46 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

I look around at others,
At some in dire need,
The lonely, lost, or fathers,
With children they can’t feed.

Life has changed, seems no one cares,
For the child on the street,
The mother doing her best to share,
Who only met defeat.

Those who live in sickness,
All hope is now despair,
Could there be some light in darkness,
If we found some time to share.

I think about the wealthy
Walking lost in self-esteem,
Wrapped up in their money,
With a pauper can’t be seen.

I was taught to be polite
And lend a helping hand.
To give it all with all my might,
That I might firmly stand.

Has life, as we know it really changed?
That we no longer share,
Has life become so rearranged?
That we’re not supposed to care?

Take time to help the down at heart
Life’s complicated this is true,
So ask yourself as each day starts,
What would Jesus do?

Woody McDaniel
Copywrite 2005

Copyright Â© WoodyMc44 ... [ 2005-03-30 11:20:46]
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Re: What Would Jesus Do (User Rating: 1 )
by glu1 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:38:03 AM AEST
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greatly insightful. a brilliantly stark and honest view into the apathy that plagues the modern world. loved it!

Re: What Would Jesus Do (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:28:56 PM AEST
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oh my god..trully inspirational i loved it,yes its true it seems like the world is growing cold,but evrything happens for a reason ,we learn our lessons throgh hardship and struggle,we should never forget jesus,and what he did for us all,he told us to follow his path,and by you writing this poem youb are spreading gods word of love and faith_keep it up i loved it more then anything i read today:)

Re: What Would Jesus Do (User Rating: 1 )
by skadmatrix on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:18:50 PM AEST
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A vary well made poem, it flows, good job

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