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Array ( [sid] => 89310 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gasping for Air [time] => 2005-03-30 08:43:38 [hometext] => Allright this one will flow alot better with a beat so bear with me: for the top lines (dada dada dada da da) bottom lines(dada da da da ....) canyoufeelyourheartbeat racing AsIm gasping for air (maybe that makes no sense let me know if it worked) [bodytext] => Can you feel your heartbeat racing
As I'm gasping for air

Do you know your skin is so soft
Softly whisper in your ear

Can you quench the thirst inside me
You're making me sweat

I've done this too long
Now its time to quit

When you feel my arms around you
Second thoughts regret

Seemed so right one more try
Just to feel so wrong tonight

I'm just a fool for you

Can I walk this path one last time
Just to look through your eyes

Lets pretend it's real we're making
I know it's not But I'm not faking

So now as you lay beside me
Is it wrong? Cause it feels so right to me


Now its like you're fading faster
Were you ever here at all

Im letting go of this disaster
Rather face this fear alone

Just slam that door behind you
Leave me gasping for air






[comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 22 [informant] => greyshadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Gasping for Air

Contributed by greyshadow on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:43:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Can you feel your heartbeat racing
As I'm gasping for air

Do you know your skin is so soft
Softly whisper in your ear

Can you quench the thirst inside me
You're making me sweat

I've done this too long
Now its time to quit

When you feel my arms around you
Second thoughts regret

Seemed so right one more try
Just to feel so wrong tonight

I'm just a fool for you

Can I walk this path one last time
Just to look through your eyes

Lets pretend it's real we're making
I know it's not But I'm not faking

So now as you lay beside me
Is it wrong? Cause it feels so right to me


Now its like you're fading faster
Were you ever here at all

Im letting go of this disaster
Rather face this fear alone

Just slam that door behind you
Leave me gasping for air










Copyright © greyshadow ... [ 2005-03-30 08:43:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Gasping for Air (User Rating: 1 )
by guts_n_glitter on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:13:13 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Gasping for Air (User Rating: 1 )
by vox on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:26:08 PM AEST
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very good , my friend.

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