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[aid] => mick
[title] => Coz of a broken promise
[time] => 2005-03-30 01:55:17
[hometext] => this is a story i just wrote its short some parts are based on true to life events and some are made up i will not say what parts though
[bodytext] => She’s on the floor of her bathroom again Legs gave in to body weight and she is bent Her head rests over the toilet She’s been cutting after she had promised to stop She cut too deep this time and cannot not stand There’s a banging on her door Her boyfriend kicks it in He sees her as she goes to cut again So he tries to take the knife away She stands and pushes him back into the wall And thrusts the knife into his shoulder She starts to cry as she hears him safe At least you won’t be able to cut anymore She falls apart on top of him His whole world came crashing down He pulled the knife out And picked her up from the floor He rushed down stairs And into his car There was so much blood every where His hands were as if permanently stained Less than half way to the hospital He starts to get dizzy and almost passes out A cop passing by sees him and signals to pull over He does. On the side of the road The cop looks around at the inside of the car And sees he sees his shirt and all the blood The cop shouts out can you drive And he answers back with a faint yes The cop tells him to follow and so he does At the entrance of the hospital The cop calls for the medical team waiting for him They go to the car and pull just her out For he had died just seconds before In her room as she recovers She’s never cried so much But she stops for a second Then she starts again For the doctor tells her That she was able to keep her baby Any more time And it would have been lost She was a very lucky girl Not every story can have a happy ending [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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