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Array ( [sid] => 89282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever in Debt to Loneliness [time] => 2005-03-30 00:31:33 [hometext] => I would like to share this with all of you. Its not all entirely sad, but it comes from sadness. [bodytext] => I am forever in debt to loneliness
It has made me what I am
And what I am eternally becoming
It has lead me here,
Wherever here is
It has given me insight and intuition
Cold Brutal Logic
It has opened a door within my mind,
That never could have existed without it
I am forever in debt to loneliness

I was utterly alone for an eternity
And in my loneliness
I watched time stand still
Like a single breath motionless
in suspended animation
I sat thinking for Aeons
Reflecting on reality, Truth,
and on the beauty of limitless possibility

In my loneliness
I was free from contentment
I was free from limitations
I was free from desire
I was free from pestilent emotions
I felt nothing
My loneliness was the closest I had ever come
To experiencing death
And when I had lost everything
Only then was I free to do anything
And as Everything was gone from me
My consciousness narrowed sharply from pain into a point
Piercing space and time
Like a wormhole materializing within my mind
Crossing over to some other vastly distant side

From my loneliness came an intellectual subconscious change
From my loneliness came a deep wordless understanding
Of things for which I could not explain
In my loneliness I sat here precariously
Half within the world of the living
And half within the world beyond imagination
I was from what I was not
My beginning stemmed from my end
In loneliness and sadness
I perpetually became a fraction less
Dividing and dividing
Into the deepest and darkest
Hyper-microscopic component of matter
Beyond nothing, decaying, emerging detached
From the very fabric of space
Separate from formulation
Separate from chaos
Separate from all things
And There I pondered the sights of existence below me
And there I remain even now
Forever in debt to loneliness [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Onslaught [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Forever in Debt to Loneliness

Contributed by Onslaught on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:31:33 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I am forever in debt to loneliness
It has made me what I am
And what I am eternally becoming
It has lead me here,
Wherever here is
It has given me insight and intuition
Cold Brutal Logic
It has opened a door within my mind,
That never could have existed without it
I am forever in debt to loneliness

I was utterly alone for an eternity
And in my loneliness
I watched time stand still
Like a single breath motionless
in suspended animation
I sat thinking for Aeons
Reflecting on reality, Truth,
and on the beauty of limitless possibility

In my loneliness
I was free from contentment
I was free from limitations
I was free from desire
I was free from pestilent emotions
I felt nothing
My loneliness was the closest I had ever come
To experiencing death
And when I had lost everything
Only then was I free to do anything
And as Everything was gone from me
My consciousness narrowed sharply from pain into a point
Piercing space and time
Like a wormhole materializing within my mind
Crossing over to some other vastly distant side

From my loneliness came an intellectual subconscious change
From my loneliness came a deep wordless understanding
Of things for which I could not explain
In my loneliness I sat here precariously
Half within the world of the living
And half within the world beyond imagination
I was from what I was not
My beginning stemmed from my end
In loneliness and sadness
I perpetually became a fraction less
Dividing and dividing
Into the deepest and darkest
Hyper-microscopic component of matter
Beyond nothing, decaying, emerging detached
From the very fabric of space
Separate from formulation
Separate from chaos
Separate from all things
And There I pondered the sights of existence below me
And there I remain even now
Forever in debt to loneliness




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Re: Forever in Debt to Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:36:35 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of wisdom.
huggs,
emy


Re: Forever in Debt to Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:24:44 AM AEST
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Amazing use of language and metaphors. Vivid imagery and powerful words. Loves it!

"I am forever in debt to loneliness
It has made me what I am
And what I am eternally becoming
It has lead me here,
Wherever here is
It has given me insight and intuition
Cold Brutal Logic
It has opened a door within my mind,
That never could have existed without it
I am forever in debt to loneliness "

Couldn't have said it better myself. Oh and thanks for the agreement in the forums. people are so niave and ignorant to truth...


Re: Forever in Debt to Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:25:08 PM AEST
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feeling it homie,chaos circles my soul,good write




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