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Array ( [sid] => 89267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lovely Fantacy [time] => 2005-03-29 22:28:50 [hometext] => I wrote this one a few months after i wrote [bodytext] => I walked to her house with flowers in my hand
I had bought them at the flower stand
I had gotten them as a special gift for you
to show that i love her deeply, even though she already knew

I walked up the driveway, as i approached the door
I paused, not knowing what i was waiting for
Then, to my glee, she opened the door as if she had expected me
just to see her standing there made me happy as can be

I looked at her as she was standing there
I can’t even describe her beauty, nor her fair
I then handed her the flowers, she took them from me
and to my relief they made her very happy

I don’t understand why, but when she is happy
it has such an amazing effect on me
and another thing that isn’t quite clear
is why it makes me so happy when she is near

well we walked down to the cafe
it was such a beautiful day
but the best part about it, I swear to u true
was the that I was there with you

we walked inside and then sat down
in the corner of the cafe there was a clown
he folded a balloon bunny, what was about to happen i knew
he handed it to you saying "some bunny loves you"

you sat there
your beauty almost to much to bare
looking and smiling at me
your happiness was clear to see

at that moment i knew that all i wanted to do
is to be somewhere, alone with you
go where it is just us two
and find a way to prove that i love you (true?)

The walk home was just as grand
we were walking hand in hand
my body ached, but i didn’t care
all that mattered to me was that you were there

chorus (idk where to put it yet):
It was so wonderful, is it clear to see?
that all i want is to have you with me
and it fills my heart with glee
when u r (so very) happy [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Mazi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Lovely Fantacy

Contributed by Mazi on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:28:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I walked to her house with flowers in my hand
I had bought them at the flower stand
I had gotten them as a special gift for you
to show that i love her deeply, even though she already knew

I walked up the driveway, as i approached the door
I paused, not knowing what i was waiting for
Then, to my glee, she opened the door as if she had expected me
just to see her standing there made me happy as can be

I looked at her as she was standing there
I can’t even describe her beauty, nor her fair
I then handed her the flowers, she took them from me
and to my relief they made her very happy

I don’t understand why, but when she is happy
it has such an amazing effect on me
and another thing that isn’t quite clear
is why it makes me so happy when she is near

well we walked down to the cafe
it was such a beautiful day
but the best part about it, I swear to u true
was the that I was there with you

we walked inside and then sat down
in the corner of the cafe there was a clown
he folded a balloon bunny, what was about to happen i knew
he handed it to you saying "some bunny loves you"

you sat there
your beauty almost to much to bare
looking and smiling at me
your happiness was clear to see

at that moment i knew that all i wanted to do
is to be somewhere, alone with you
go where it is just us two
and find a way to prove that i love you (true?)

The walk home was just as grand
we were walking hand in hand
my body ached, but i didn’t care
all that mattered to me was that you were there

chorus (idk where to put it yet):
It was so wonderful, is it clear to see?
that all i want is to have you with me
and it fills my heart with glee
when u r (so very) happy




Copyright © Mazi ... [ 2005-03-29 22:28:50]
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Re: Lovely Fantacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:16:50 PM AEST
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Lovely piece. :-)


Re: Lovely Fantacy (User Rating: 1 )
by dragonfly1979 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 02:13:19 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful




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