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Array ( [sid] => 89230 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Count Me Out [time] => 2005-03-29 17:58:03 [hometext] => If this is what life is about, then count me out. Kane [bodytext] => Darkness falls, blood paints the walls,
Hear the sceams, demons they sing,
Baptized in blood, forget all love,
Born in hate, innocents raped,
Forgotten by all, Satan hear my call,
Release your fury, eyesight blury,
Run you swines, another weak soul is mine,
The hotter the flames, the more I'm blamed,
Remove my pain, they say I'm insane,
Cold to the touch, the widow's bite, the venom is too much,
A prosititute's life, a whore becomes a wife,
This is the world, and people act as if their unsure,
Facts are facts, terrorist attack,
9/11 thousands went to heaven,
If this is what life is about, then count me out.

Heart & Soul
Kane

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Count Me Out

Contributed by Kane on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:58:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Darkness falls, blood paints the walls,
Hear the sceams, demons they sing,
Baptized in blood, forget all love,
Born in hate, innocents raped,
Forgotten by all, Satan hear my call,
Release your fury, eyesight blury,
Run you swines, another weak soul is mine,
The hotter the flames, the more I'm blamed,
Remove my pain, they say I'm insane,
Cold to the touch, the widow's bite, the venom is too much,
A prosititute's life, a whore becomes a wife,
This is the world, and people act as if their unsure,
Facts are facts, terrorist attack,
9/11 thousands went to heaven,
If this is what life is about, then count me out.

Heart & Soul
Kane

Copyright © Kane ... [ 2005-03-29 17:58:03]
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Re: Count Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:05:36 PM AEST
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Yes, I too will never understand the ironies of life. Great write. Very insightful and interesting.

Re: Count Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by jeza on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:14:47 PM AEST
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life is never what we expect and i dont think i will ever understand it this was an excelent write

Re: Count Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:21:21 PM AEST
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Powerful poem,but don't count yourself out.
Christ said pick up your cross,Come follow me.
Like a mother in child pang these things will happen;then comes the end.
Satan the most powerful being next to God has much power.He purswaded Adam & Eve the could have knowlage and be as God.
Satan has much power---is nature--hatreds--all wrongs his doing ? I don't know,but Jesus told us to endure until He comes again.
Remember Jesus suffered terribly--then rose.
He said the last sin to be defeated would be death--so--how much power does the devil hold ?
Keep faith,and again,Good poem.

Sined

Re: Count Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:38:08 PM AEST
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Welcome back, Kane.....

Jenni

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