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The autumn leaves fallen scattered all over the grass
The dark blackened clouds hover swelling with rain
As winter makes its call
Thunder bellows on top of the terrain
My heart settles uneasily
Amidst the mid afternoon
Watching through the window
As winds gust like the winds of the monsoon
I remembered those past memories
That I once shared with you
I was forever so happy
These feelings were ever so true
But there came a blackened day
When you decided to walk out
My eyes marred with mournful tears
As my heart tried to stay stout
It was a painful day like this
That brings back thoughts of you
What I had and what I lost
There was simply nothing I could do
You said you needed some space
To think of the things in your life through
Since then you turned around and left
Leaving me heart broken and blue
So whenever this season of the year
Makes its way around
I suffer pain and misery
Tears sadly on my face found [comments] => 9 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Seasons without your love

Contributed by mina-1 on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The sands of time pass through the hour glass
The autumn leaves fallen scattered all over the grass
The dark blackened clouds hover swelling with rain
As winter makes its call
Thunder bellows on top of the terrain
My heart settles uneasily
Amidst the mid afternoon
Watching through the window
As winds gust like the winds of the monsoon
I remembered those past memories
That I once shared with you
I was forever so happy
These feelings were ever so true
But there came a blackened day
When you decided to walk out
My eyes marred with mournful tears
As my heart tried to stay stout
It was a painful day like this
That brings back thoughts of you
What I had and what I lost
There was simply nothing I could do
You said you needed some space
To think of the things in your life through
Since then you turned around and left
Leaving me heart broken and blue
So whenever this season of the year
Makes its way around
I suffer pain and misery
Tears sadly on my face found

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-03-29 16:36:54]
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Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:54:06 PM AEST
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This is very Very good. It is full of anguish and pain in every word. One of the best I've read...This could probably be passed off as a shakespeare sonnet with a little reviseing. Like I said, Very nice.

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Les4567 on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:36:07 PM AEST
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Sue, I really liked this poem, I could feel the heartache while I was reading it. You are just so darn talented. Very nice poem hun.
~Les

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:19:41 PM AEST
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Sue,
This is such a emotional vivid poem!!! I love it!!! It is both beautiful and touching!!!
Leia36

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:16:32 PM AEST
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An emotional write filled with heart brake so

sorry 4 your pain . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:34:01 AM AEST
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well done but so sad

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:19:43 AM AEST
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wow Sue that was really something, so deep and so powerful, you really made me feel your emotions,
pix xx

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:48:49 AM AEST
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Awww Sue how i felt your words. I hope you heartache eases in time.

A beautiful emotional write

(((HUGS)))

Love Angelxxx

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:49:22 AM AEST
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STUNNING & OVER COMING! WHAT A HEART TO WRITE WITH A BROKEN PART!! SO SORRY,BUT THE POEM IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL!!! LOVED IT!!!

DAN!!!!

Re: Seasons without your love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 06:28:18 AM AEST
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I could feel your anguish..very well written :-) venkat

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