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Array ( [sid] => 8920 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Undecided [time] => 2002-12-20 10:20:00 [hometext] => ...A poem about having your best and most recalled memories with someone you just forgave...and wondering if you want those memories back risking pain, or to move on and stay the way you are. [bodytext] => No words left to linger
For any other name
Though the 'we' has faded
And has fallen to shame

Alone, we're not to blame
Though you have made me cry
Cold nights like this I ask,
Were you the perfect guy?

How many ways can I,
Ask myself, just wherefore
Through my eyes WE'RE perfect,
At least we were before

But do I still want more
Than achieved by myself?
Am I alright alone
Here with an empty shelf?

When one should give oneself
As I would do for you
-Or would have done before
If only you had knew

All the things we went through
The good mem'ries we've had
The song I still recall
Sometimes it makes me sad

There's nothing more to add
Our time together paused
All I have's remembrance
And the pain this has caused [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => flirtyrockstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Undecided

Contributed by flirtyrockstar on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



No words left to linger
For any other name
Though the 'we' has faded
And has fallen to shame

Alone, we're not to blame
Though you have made me cry
Cold nights like this I ask,
Were you the perfect guy?

How many ways can I,
Ask myself, just wherefore
Through my eyes WE'RE perfect,
At least we were before

But do I still want more
Than achieved by myself?
Am I alright alone
Here with an empty shelf?

When one should give oneself
As I would do for you
-Or would have done before
If only you had knew

All the things we went through
The good mem'ries we've had
The song I still recall
Sometimes it makes me sad

There's nothing more to add
Our time together paused
All I have's remembrance
And the pain this has caused




Copyright © flirtyrockstar ... [ 2002-12-20 10:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Undecided (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:38:20 PM AEST
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Wondering if you want those memories back to risk the pain again eh?? Well all i can say here is follow your heart and do what your heart tells you to do because your heart can never be wrong...just don't let your heart get confused with your mind because this is where trouble lays...and fear dont let fear take over anything in your life or any part of who you are.....fear stops us from learning and experiencing things that may just very well turn out to be the very best things in life...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Undecided (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 03:12:48 PM AEST
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I know how this feels. It can be hard to know what to do, but in the end, everything happens as it's meant to and everything happens for a reason and whatever happens makes you who you are, so that when you find someone that doesn't leave you asking questions like this, someone that loves you pure and simple, this experience will have helped make you into that person that they will love.

~ MoonlitAngel


Re: Undecided (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 07:51:52 PM AEST
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Have been struggling with these feelings as well ... this poem says it perfectly. Well written.




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