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You stab me with the knife of regret
Feeling so lonely
Knowing these nights I will never forget
Dying once again
So many times I was left alone
Crying at the end
From the edge I had been thrown
Catch me now
But it’s already too late for me
No way, no how
Too far away from where I should be
With a knife in my back
I fall through this dead open sky
So dry and so black
Would anyone stop to question why
Still falling faster
Mesmerized by the glaring sunshine
And my dreams shatter
Can’t forget how I lost all that was mine
Kill this poisoned curse
To finally get it over with
But will it hurt
Only for one final minute
One last pain
To end all my misery forever
One last rain
To end all my bad weather
One last cry
To end all my bloody tears
One last goodbye
To anyone who will hear
Goodbye….

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One Last Cry For Help

Contributed by blue_angel on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:14:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Killing me slowly
You stab me with the knife of regret
Feeling so lonely
Knowing these nights I will never forget
Dying once again
So many times I was left alone
Crying at the end
From the edge I had been thrown
Catch me now
But it’s already too late for me
No way, no how
Too far away from where I should be
With a knife in my back
I fall through this dead open sky
So dry and so black
Would anyone stop to question why
Still falling faster
Mesmerized by the glaring sunshine
And my dreams shatter
Can’t forget how I lost all that was mine
Kill this poisoned curse
To finally get it over with
But will it hurt
Only for one final minute
One last pain
To end all my misery forever
One last rain
To end all my bad weather
One last cry
To end all my bloody tears
One last goodbye
To anyone who will hear
Goodbye….

Copyright Â© blue_angel ... [ 2005-03-29 14:14:51]
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Re: One Last Cry For Help (User Rating: 1 )
by namesaretaken on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:18:43 PM AEST
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For something you're not use to writing I thought it was really well done Suicide poetry is not always my fav to read but I could actually relate to parts of this peice my fav line were

"Too far away from where I should be
With a knife in my back
I fall through this dead open sky
So dry and so black"

I liked it good job
~nat~

Re: One Last Cry For Help (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:04:50 PM AEST
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truly sad and very emotional, your words portayd the pain well, I have not felt this way exactly but , I have longed for death out of pain like this. and I am glad to say that i didnt follow through with it and I am glad to see that you didnt ether. I will pray for you.

this was a good poembrought back memories to me that iI didnt want to rember (dont feel sorry, that meant this was well done.) made it all the more powerful I did enjoy reading it , I too "write to get thought" tough times in my life. dont dewll on them if you do they wont ever let you free. be strong and God bless.

wolfman

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