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Array ( [sid] => 89175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Whisper [time] => 2005-03-29 11:22:49 [hometext] => This poem was written a few weeks ago in three different poems. The flow of it might not be the best but all the poems were linked and I really don't like how small they are by themselves. The whole theme of it might be odd but it's one of my favorites. [bodytext] => Beautiful fragility
As he speaks softly
As he looks so broken
My mind is full of wonder
When I hear him whisper
But I hope I never know

Pain filled perfection
That's what I see in him
Iconic obsession
Was the source of my love for him
His beauty was resurrected
From that one September day
And he's too good for a mortality
Because unlike us he belongs only to himself.

I stopped crying after two weeks
Because of our sudden goodbye
I'll forever consider it our last kiss
When he stopped with just a smile.
We were doing so well in our painful way
But they pulled him from the bottom of the lake
Isn't that why I fell for the beauty of his flaws? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Greenlee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

The Whisper

Contributed by Greenlee on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:22:49 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Beautiful fragility
As he speaks softly
As he looks so broken
My mind is full of wonder
When I hear him whisper
But I hope I never know

Pain filled perfection
That's what I see in him
Iconic obsession
Was the source of my love for him
His beauty was resurrected
From that one September day
And he's too good for a mortality
Because unlike us he belongs only to himself.

I stopped crying after two weeks
Because of our sudden goodbye
I'll forever consider it our last kiss
When he stopped with just a smile.
We were doing so well in our painful way
But they pulled him from the bottom of the lake
Isn't that why I fell for the beauty of his flaws?

Copyright © Greenlee ... [ 2005-03-29 11:22:49]
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Re: The Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:13:19 PM AEST
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I love this, it is a stunning piece of writing, Sad, but still wonderful..
I especially loved that last stanza.

Great write,
Phil

Re: The Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:31:31 PM AEST
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written beautifully... heartwrenching... my best to you and warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Greenlee on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:46:41 PM AEST
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thanks for the comments. I appreciate them

nessa:
I believe that you've commented some of my old old poetry from when I used to be at the site before and I appreciate it just the same

Re: The Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:55:24 PM AEST
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excellent poem i couldnt of told that this was 3 seperate poems except maybe the last stanza which stood out- did enjoy reading this poem- I loved lines about iconic obessions and the importance of the whisper. nice work.

Re: The Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:59:15 PM AEST
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Powerful and incredibly sad. A wonderful write. Five stars from me.

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