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Array ( [sid] => 89158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another chance [time] => 2005-03-29 09:04:49 [hometext] => yea well i dunno again [bodytext] => I hate to sleep
I hate to wake
Knowing your not laying beside me
Maybe that’s why I hate
No reason to love
You’re not here to show me love
We’ve waited so long to meet
We’ve been in many relationships
I don’t know about you but I regret mine
My past haunts me
You remind me of what I’m missing
You show me what I want to have
Just hearing your voice, your laugh
Brightens my day
But knowing your hearts not mine drives me away
Sickens my heart
Tears me apart inside
I won’t give up
You are my dream
To hold and kiss you
Have become my number one goal
In my life, please give me another chance [comments] => 4 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Another chance

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:04:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I hate to sleep
I hate to wake
Knowing your not laying beside me
Maybe that’s why I hate
No reason to love
You’re not here to show me love
We’ve waited so long to meet
We’ve been in many relationships
I don’t know about you but I regret mine
My past haunts me
You remind me of what I’m missing
You show me what I want to have
Just hearing your voice, your laugh
Brightens my day
But knowing your hearts not mine drives me away
Sickens my heart
Tears me apart inside
I won’t give up
You are my dream
To hold and kiss you
Have become my number one goal
In my life, please give me another chance

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Re: Another chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:09:11 AM AEST
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Wow, your feelings really come across in this poem i love it!!

Re: Another chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:19:35 PM AEST
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Great write, emotions are strongly showed in it, i like the way you use such good expression words keep it up

~Kay-Kay

Re: Another chance (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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awesome write,some advice,never give up on something or someone u truly love,1 day they'll become urs,dont try hard,dont be someone who ur not,be urself,show them...

Re: Another chance (User Rating: 1 )
by LanieBug on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:08:52 PM AEST
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i loved this poem! i feel this way about u. i hope that one day u will give me ur heart knowing u can trust me in everythng. CAN WE START OVER? WILL U GIVE ME ANOTHER CHANCE? to be that person u were once madly in love with. just tell me what i need to do. I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!

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