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[title] => God?
[time] => 2005-03-28 21:13:14
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[bodytext] => your born into a world you cant control
just doing what your told
believing what your care takers believe
untill you mature then it all becomes questions
questions no one can awnser but yourself
what is the perpose of this existance
why are we here
are we meerly an antfarm this "god" has made
and sits back an watches while we suffer
death and sadness are all around
does he even shead a tear
does he care what happens to me?
why did he just let us be?
sure we have it good in the states
but what about were they dont have it so great
whats wrong with them, and whats so good about us
becoming were we deny "god" with material possesions
so why do we have so much
when we only need so little
sometimes i wonder, and im not alone
if there's a "god" who cares
i want to believe so badly i do
but when i see suffering all around
all i can do is shed my tears
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God?
Contributed by
skadmatrix
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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your born into a world you cant control
just doing what your told
believing what your care takers believe
untill you mature then it all becomes questions
questions no one can awnser but yourself
what is the perpose of this existance
why are we here
are we meerly an antfarm this "god" has made
and sits back an watches while we suffer
death and sadness are all around
does he even shead a tear
does he care what happens to me?
why did he just let us be?
sure we have it good in the states
but what about were they dont have it so great
whats wrong with them, and whats so good about us
becoming were we deny "god" with material possesions
so why do we have so much
when we only need so little
sometimes i wonder, and im not alone
if there's a "god" who cares
i want to believe so badly i do
but when i see suffering all around
all i can do is shed my tears
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Re: God?
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by ell_03 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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| think about it like chess. your opponent makes a move that u dont understand, but in the end it all works out. it works the same with god. we cant even come close to comprehending what he has in store. so we should just trust him that it will all work out for the best. it always has for me even if i doubted at one time or another. it is all just faith. if you want to talk some more or reply to my coment just mail me. |
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Re: God?
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:26:29 PM AEST
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A very thought provoking write here full with questions that we all ask at times. this fact makes it a masterpeice.
I've learned from experience number god only wants us to luv others and believe. Also that we all make our own heaven or hell right here on Planet Earth in our actions and choices in life.
when we realize that we've made the wrong choice then It's the holy spirit that forgives us and leads us back to our heavenly fathers luv at the foot of the cross.
Many things I don't understand either but I know that Jesus christ died on the cross so I can find forgiveness. Also that he rose from the tomb to show us eteranal life.
I don't do religion any more but one thing and the only thing that I'm 100% sure of is that I'm Jesus kid.
Keep writing as u have the natural talent on loan from god.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
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Re: God?
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:31:48 PM AEST
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| yea well good write but umm i think we was made to live our life and the die, live, love, create hope for others umm i dont know if there is a god or not but if there is he's n us all, we are each others god theres more i wanna say but yea cant get it out to make since |
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Re: God?
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:44:48 PM AEST
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"without suffering there would be no compassion"
- a walk to remember |
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Re: God?
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:53:12 PM AEST
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| I agree with ell_03, that's why they call it faith, believeing in something that you can't see. It's like the story of Job, God let satan do to Job what he wanted to prove to him Job's faith was more than just words. I can't answer why God lets suffering go on in this world, only God Himself can answer that. Anyway, Great write. |
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Re: God?
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by bigtig6269 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:40:51 PM AEST
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| I feel the exact same way. You put it in your poetry so well. I believe in God, but here lately, I've been wondering. There have been so many events happen. So many kids being taken away at such a young age, all from my school. My best friend dies on war, other friends getting shot. There are so many different gods in this world. How do we know ours is right? What if we die and meet Buddha, or Allah, or someone like that. I'm still a christian, but my faith has been weak lately. Thank you for putting the feelings I have into words. Keep up the good work |
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by Avernus on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:50:25 PM AEST
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| You know how they say we are all God's children? How would you treat your child? You can only tell them the way it is their choice if they take the right path. And if they end up suffering then they have to learn from their mistakes. But like a parent to a child there is always the forgivness and love no matter how bad we screw up. Terrific piece though, a real conversation maker. I love it |
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Re: God?
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:26:52 AM AEST
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History
His-Story
Sin was born because of man.Christ came to save the world.
Pick up your cross-Come follow Me.
Next to God Satan is the most powerful being.
He was allowed to take control of the world.
Adam and Eve followed sin entered the world.
Man wanted knowlage "to be like God"
"Orignial sin"
Satan temps Man
Satan has control of the elements
Christ came as one of us
He has already defeated satan
and satan doesn't even know
The last sin to be defeated is death
O'death where is thy sting
When we die we are called to live
life to its fullest
Eternaly
We are judged
Heaven or hell
We judge ourselves before God by words and deed
Heaven or hell we made the choise
On earth as it is in heaven
All love all peace all happiness
His Kingdom Come
It has already begun
In His own time
Christ will come again
Glory be to the Father
To the Son
To the Holy spirit
World with out end
Amen
God does not create to destroy
"Pick up Your cross"
"Come follow Me"
Sinned
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