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Array ( [sid] => 89111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Cannot Be Dead [time] => 2005-03-28 20:11:03 [hometext] => Once again, one of my greatest fears. [bodytext] => Not thinking clearly
These thoughts will not process.
What do you mean
She’s dead?
Stop lying to me,
It’s not something I can take.
Her smile cannot be gone,
Her body’s grace cannot be taken.
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean
It was suicide?
Stop lying to me,
Your not telling the truth.
She was so happy,
She was so loved,
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean
You speak the truth?
Stop lying to me,
Your words are filth.
Her laugh has not disappeared,
Her eyes have not glazed.
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean,
You are speaking true?
Stop lying to me,
I cannot listen.
Life is worthless without her,
Promises are meaningless.
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean,
She can be dead?
Stop lying to me,
This cannot be the truth.
Tears are pouring in streams,
Smiles seem non-existent,
Is she really dead?

What do you mean,
This is her body?
Stop lying to me,
This cannot be it.
Those cuts all over the wrists,
The empty bottle of pills,
Is she really dead?

What do you mean,
Yes she’s really dead?
Stop lying to me,
She must be alive.
But she is not,
And this must be faced,
For she is really dead. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 460 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Live2Die [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

She Cannot Be Dead

Contributed by Live2Die on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Not thinking clearly
These thoughts will not process.
What do you mean
She’s dead?
Stop lying to me,
It’s not something I can take.
Her smile cannot be gone,
Her body’s grace cannot be taken.
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean
It was suicide?
Stop lying to me,
Your not telling the truth.
She was so happy,
She was so loved,
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean
You speak the truth?
Stop lying to me,
Your words are filth.
Her laugh has not disappeared,
Her eyes have not glazed.
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean,
You are speaking true?
Stop lying to me,
I cannot listen.
Life is worthless without her,
Promises are meaningless.
She cannot be dead.

What do you mean,
She can be dead?
Stop lying to me,
This cannot be the truth.
Tears are pouring in streams,
Smiles seem non-existent,
Is she really dead?

What do you mean,
This is her body?
Stop lying to me,
This cannot be it.
Those cuts all over the wrists,
The empty bottle of pills,
Is she really dead?

What do you mean,
Yes she’s really dead?
Stop lying to me,
She must be alive.
But she is not,
And this must be faced,
For she is really dead.

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Re: She Cannot Be Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:36:59 PM AEST
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What a touching write.
Evertime I read a poem on here 'bout cutting and suicide it breaks my heart.
A great write as it jus might wake up some people and especially some parents that don't even notice the kids with the cuts.
A masterpeice.
god bless u for posting this.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy

Re: She Cannot Be Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:12:48 PM AEST
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Good write. It is a bit repetative but I do that in some of mine too...good over all write...hope it wasn't based on someone you knew...

Carol

Re: She Cannot Be Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:59:45 PM AEST
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ooo
this ones good. definitely. who do you fear this will happen to? NEway... great write -Solomon

Re: She Cannot Be Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:49:09 PM AEST
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OMGsh this poem is gripping for me. I have OCD and death to ppl i Love is one of my biggest fears ppl I Logve keep dying lately and its hard to sleep amoung other reasons because of my worrieg for everyone I Love. But we must trust in God and Live for him remember everything really does have a reason and I know it sounds cleasha but it is the truth. It will get better, for you and me both!!!!!!!!!!!!

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