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I can’t do this no more can’t live my life like this, time for me to move on a pick myself up outta this abyss.

Gotta let some people go even though it will hurt me so, they just gotta understand, I’m trying to become a better man and I don’t need or can’t have nobody holding my hand, I gotta do it on my own, I gotta learn on my own to stand.

Can’t have no stress in my life, gonna say goodbye to strife, can’t have nobody to the left of me that I now ain’t right. Must get those perverted things outta my life outta my sight, time to step outta the darkness and into the light.

Not depending on words of promise from man because they’ve always seems to do me wrong and the promises always seem to be just figments of my imagination.

Can't wait no more for people to do things for me, I gotta do them on my own. Wasn't born with a gold or silver spoon in my mouth so whatever ever it is that I want, I gotta work for aint' nobody gonna buy it for me, I gotta work for it on my own.

It's time out for the procrastinating and time to put some actions behind these words that proceed outta my mouth

It's time to stop looking back at my past and start looking foward to my future

It's time to become a man....but Lord I'mma need You, because it ain't about me no more...it's all about You. Have Your way.
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Contributed by justpoetic on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:56:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Lord please help me because I’m struggling with this and that and that and this and I’m confused, this don’t make no sense. Migraines take over my mainframe making it hard for me to maintain and sustain these tears that run from my eyes like water down a drain.

I can’t do this no more can’t live my life like this, time for me to move on a pick myself up outta this abyss.

Gotta let some people go even though it will hurt me so, they just gotta understand, I’m trying to become a better man and I don’t need or can’t have nobody holding my hand, I gotta do it on my own, I gotta learn on my own to stand.

Can’t have no stress in my life, gonna say goodbye to strife, can’t have nobody to the left of me that I now ain’t right. Must get those perverted things outta my life outta my sight, time to step outta the darkness and into the light.

Not depending on words of promise from man because they’ve always seems to do me wrong and the promises always seem to be just figments of my imagination.

Can't wait no more for people to do things for me, I gotta do them on my own. Wasn't born with a gold or silver spoon in my mouth so whatever ever it is that I want, I gotta work for aint' nobody gonna buy it for me, I gotta work for it on my own.

It's time out for the procrastinating and time to put some actions behind these words that proceed outta my mouth

It's time to stop looking back at my past and start looking foward to my future

It's time to become a man....but Lord I'mma need You, because it ain't about me no more...it's all about You. Have Your way.




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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:00:13 AM AEST
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In Jesus name, amen
jesus name gives us the power at the cross and amen means it is done. I other words sighned in Jesus blood from calvry.
an awesome prayer. I will put u in my prayers, Keep the faith,
huggs,
emy


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Maxximus on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:23:35 PM AEST
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Good one... honest and well worded, nice descriptions. Hold onto that faith, when the world has left you it's all you have besides yourself. Belief is a powerful ally when doubts are knocking at your door. A suggestion, if I may, for the title would be Thy Will Be Done




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