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God sent you to me from way up above.
I made a promise to Him and signed on the “X”.
I dated the contract and swore to do my best.
Now, I promise to you, I’ll strive to be number one.
I will love you with the purest of love until my job is done.
You are a loan to me with no interest or fees.
When you are grown I’ll bend to pray on my knees;
I’ll thank God for loaning you to me,
And pray He will help you be the best you can be.

Your Mommy
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To My Babies

Contributed by nativesunflower4 on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I am your mommy, all filled with love.
God sent you to me from way up above.
I made a promise to Him and signed on the “X”.
I dated the contract and swore to do my best.
Now, I promise to you, I’ll strive to be number one.
I will love you with the purest of love until my job is done.
You are a loan to me with no interest or fees.
When you are grown I’ll bend to pray on my knees;
I’ll thank God for loaning you to me,
And pray He will help you be the best you can be.

Your Mommy

Copyright Â© nativesunflower4 ... [ 2005-03-28 17:21:48]
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Re: To My Babies (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:43:54 AM AEST
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A very beautifull write filled with the passions of a mother.
huggs,
emy

Re: To My Babies (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 09:27:45 PM AEST
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awesome...i loved it...did you ever show it to your kids?

Re: To My Babies (User Rating: 1 )
by nativesunflower4 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:54:20 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comment!!! I showed it to my girls and they liked it...They are so sweet!!!! I have a binder all my work goes into including the stuff from when I was a teenager. The girls love reading them to their friends. Thank you again....I am off to read some of your writes!!!!

Re: To My Babies (User Rating: 1 )
by twobabies on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:28:31 PM AEST
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I thought it was sweet. I am a young mother and have 2 children and this defines how mothers feel beautifully to me. Thank you for sharing it.

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