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Array ( [sid] => 89055 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgotten [time] => 2005-03-28 12:43:00 [hometext] => The first part is about my ex, Jordan, but the rest is about Robbie. This was written awhile back and I think it sucks. lol [bodytext] => He abandoned me when I needed him
And I didn't know what to do
I guess he didnt really know
What the word love means

All I wanted to do was die
But then you came along
And fixed my broken heart
The best that you could

I thought that this was it
That you knew what love was
I never thought you'd ever forget me

Things were perfect
After you'd break my heart
You'd go and fix it again
You let me know how it felt to be loved

But then came the day
You said it was over
And you didn't take it back
You wouldn't fix my heart

So now here I am abandoned again
And I don't hear you coming
Instead you sit there with her
And I am once again forgotten [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BrokenAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Forgotten

Contributed by BrokenAngel on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

He abandoned me when I needed him
And I didn't know what to do
I guess he didnt really know
What the word love means

All I wanted to do was die
But then you came along
And fixed my broken heart
The best that you could

I thought that this was it
That you knew what love was
I never thought you'd ever forget me

Things were perfect
After you'd break my heart
You'd go and fix it again
You let me know how it felt to be loved

But then came the day
You said it was over
And you didn't take it back
You wouldn't fix my heart

So now here I am abandoned again
And I don't hear you coming
Instead you sit there with her
And I am once again forgotten

Copyright © BrokenAngel ... [ 2005-03-28 12:43:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:35:21 PM AEST
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WHAT DOESNT KILL YOU ONLY MAKES YOU STRONGER , REMEMBER THAT MA.

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:28:24 PM AEST
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I think you were being hard on yourself when you said this sucks.
It's really good and I have been in this position before so I know what you're feeling.
Nice write!

~Brenna~

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