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One Dream, now she's on my mind.
It just hit me out of the blue
But I'm not fooled that this love is true.

I've been cheated once before,
By destiny's false lore.
I threw to much away
and now it's gone, always to stay.

But this one dream, with one kiss.
Has it been there all along. What did I miss?
Or is it simply a trick, played by my mind.
A simple illusion that passes with time.

Well whatever it is, she's on my mind. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 33 [informant] => scottmunster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

One Dream

Contributed by scottmunster on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:07:12 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Too Short, not enough time.
One Dream, now she's on my mind.
It just hit me out of the blue
But I'm not fooled that this love is true.

I've been cheated once before,
By destiny's false lore.
I threw to much away
and now it's gone, always to stay.

But this one dream, with one kiss.
Has it been there all along. What did I miss?
Or is it simply a trick, played by my mind.
A simple illusion that passes with time.

Well whatever it is, she's on my mind.

Copyright © scottmunster ... [ 2005-03-28 04:07:12]
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Re: One Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:12:37 AM AEST
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Well, I'm awful glad I was online when you dropped your first post. If this is an introduction to what you will be offering up in the future... I'll be dropping by your page on occasion.

I love the last line here. It occurs to me that I really ought to learn to let it be whatever it is and stop spending so much time wondering exactly what that is! lol

Welcome to YPDC, Scott - I hope you'll be posting more-
~SNM~

Re: One Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Nos_Bunny on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:46:29 AM AEST
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Thats pretty good, just a few spelling mistakes but I don't think anyone will bother, I liked the little touch at the end of how you ended the poem without its effect

Re: One Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:28:27 AM AEST
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Scottmunster
Nicely written as for spelling you may use the editor button on the screen to correct, do that often. You have a good sence of words andI too hope you keep posting. I like your writes--:)

Sinned

Re: One Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:02:18 AM AEST
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very very good my friend im not saprised at all tho i knew you had it in you.

SM

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