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Array ( [sid] => 89012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Free Spirit [time] => 2005-03-27 23:06:03 [hometext] => I wrote this poem on 3/24/05 at 5:15am. I couldn't sleep, I felt my friend Suzanne was in pain but could not contact her. I spoke to her the next day and she was in pain and also dedicated a poem for me. True friends from the heart. [bodytext] => She has a free spirit like a bird flying high
Sharing love and kindness
To all who pass by
However, having such a giving and open heart
Allows those who take advantage
And tears her apart
One can only give so much.
She feels one day she may slip,
Leaving a wounded free spirit
As though her wings have been clipped
I can feel your heart is full of pain
For I feel you pain in my heart just the same
Oh, Free Spirit, Please don't give up and
Let life pass you by,
For I will always be here by your side.

Love,
Evelyn
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Evilnn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Free Spirit

Contributed by Evilnn on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:06:03 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

She has a free spirit like a bird flying high
Sharing love and kindness
To all who pass by
However, having such a giving and open heart
Allows those who take advantage
And tears her apart
One can only give so much.
She feels one day she may slip,
Leaving a wounded free spirit
As though her wings have been clipped
I can feel your heart is full of pain
For I feel you pain in my heart just the same
Oh, Free Spirit, Please don't give up and
Let life pass you by,
For I will always be here by your side.

Love,
Evelyn

Copyright © Evilnn ... [ 2005-03-27 23:06:03]
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Re: Free Spirit (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldthunny17 on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:20:52 PM AEST
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U r soo lucky u have that friendship, and Suzanne is really really lucky too...

Wow. GOod write and its sweet.

Luv, Cebre

Re: Free Spirit (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:02:50 AM AEST
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aww thats sweet:)

xoxo

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